14 lines. i'll drop in like 20 minutes....

just check in before u start keying and drop around 20 minutes after....

all votes must be explained well.

good luck dawg

Im addin a P before my W when bringin this fake MC Paines
Lyrically inflicting sickening rivets like incisions in his face
See im the king of multis...so bow down to your master
Slashing ya soft butter structure like im a jurassic velocoraptor
You dont deserve a win, maybe a grammy, for your sustaining imitation
Its like Aines is immune to illness, like the idiot had various vaccinations
And im serving you as the live virus, Meters was just preperation
how you supposed to make the team, when you got murdered in initiation?
your striving for somethin out ya league, your hopes bound to be defeated
Paragone is like your girls G spot, your short shit just cant reach it
whats wit the avy, dude? is that your imaginary crew?
Reppin Crip Blue cuz he sad he didnt get in the group he wanted to?!?
You could call my shit emotional.....cuz my punches are deeply impacting
See Phoeniix and Aimes is silimar-but he FLAMES in a way contrasting

check check just start keyin sum shit .................................................. ...................

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Ayo check dis.............................

yo phoenix ur lyrics are as played and onld as an antique/
ive only bin rappin 4 10 seconds and ur fallin at ma feet/

Like your lyrics your mums love for u is fake/
rejecting me from paragone is ur biggest mistake/

Pheonixx you dont get pussy like me,your fuckin queer/
You must be the first nigger that cant even tap beer/

Imma murder yo ass you dont deserve to be alive/
Yo lyrics take a fuckin eternity 4 them 2 arrive(hit me)/

My lips cant be contained im killing this nigga/
You got a better chance of dueting with 'rah digga'/

Phoenix face it, Im causin you post traumatic stress,spittin with my appealing calamity/
Dont take this beating to heart, because it runs in the family/

Im done...................

uppin 4 votes

Mc aines

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first line its supposed 2 say old............................................... ................................................

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uppin #1 this needs votes............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .......................

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I WANT VOTES ON MY BATTLE FROM YALL 2 B4 I VOTE HERE PLEASE

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101140

CAUSE MAN .. MY BATTLE IS GETTING MAD SLEPT ON .. SO PLEASE HONEST VOTE THERE AND ILL HONEST VOTE HERE

THANX

PEACE

Open = Aines

"yo phoenix ur lyrics are as played and onld as an antique/
ive only bin rappin 4 10 seconds and ur fallin at ma feet/"

Structure = Phoenix

Punches = Tie

Close = Aines

"Phoenix face it, Im causin you post traumatic stress,spittin with my appealing calamity/
Dont take this beating to heart, because it runs in the family/"


Vote = Aines

GOOD BATTLE

uppin #2 needs votes............................................. .................................................. ..............

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wat phoenix fuckin ripped aines str8 up
great flows, fuck all that structure and shit imma str8 quality critic, i look for the meaning/ indepthness of rhymes and aimes rhymes r all recycled stuff i hear on the streets everyday phoenix is orignal and phoenix if you got a click i want in i like your style

pm me

Opener: P
Close: P
flow: tie
Struct: P
Punchesl: Mc
Personals: P
Win P
Please drop an honest vote here guys. Thanks, Merry Christmas http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100988

uppin no #3 .................................................. .................................................. ............................

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All i can say on dis battle is: if Mc aines dnt win this there is Something dramatically wrong with u voters!
PeAcE

yo aight

opener P
flow P
strucuter tie
injoyment tie
creativity tie
closer M

overall Pho

no hate jus a vote

check my battle in my sig plz

peace

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