rules

10 lines
no h/c/dr/bs votes
no bitin, or recyclin
no freepostin
only well explained votes will be xcepted
u spit first
i'll drop asap seein as how its xmas an all
g'luck nigga....

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*see profile for personals*...oh if you don't get punches don't strain yourself tryna figger em out...also, my formattin on my comp is fucked so it may not look like 10 lines...but it is


yo when i spit, my words produce a "fatal-strike"...nigga, i ain't new to this, i've been "rappin-since-birth" like i was born wit a "pre-natal-mic"
ya rhymes are "comical" like "fat-al"...like a "bad-baseball-player", you've been "swingin" all day an ain't got nuttin but "strykes"
his crew is "jacko" he roll wit "young 1's"...nigga, "poor" like a "banka" wit "insufficient-funds"...i'm willin ta bet this nigga gon' "cum-spittin" some "faggot-ass-jokes"...you think i'm playin witchu?...i'm more "serious-than-strokes"...
my mean wordz make this nigga wanna "cum" at me, he gets "furious-an-chokes"

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its only 8 lines, but it looked like 10 when i submitted it...ROFL.....................................

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Usin my lyrical tactics to make you NOTICE/
Winnin against me is impossible like foot racing a LOTUS/
My raps travel in packs and attack like LOCUST/
Like Joe Budden i keep my FOCUS/
Gettin diSSmiSSED/
Prolly wasnt on Your CHRISTMAS wishLIST/
COuldnt land'a punch like'a boxer with broken FISTs/
WHat is this? A rapper with wak game like SEGA GENESIS/
No CONTEST/
For me this was'a PISS TEST/



YA PEACE !

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YOU SAId 10 bars SON!! lol. i dont care. . . ALLL YA'LL BETTER VOTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ya flow was str8 component. i aint hate'n

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aight...heres da breakdown:

structure: proph
punchesroph
personalsroph
multisroph
complexity:none
enjoyability:neither
overall: proph

nice battle botha u...fatal...elevate a lil bit and u'll be straight

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Wins
Realest~Rap(5-0)
3%(5-0)
inkwell(5-0)
eminem minis(5-3)
lyrical extasy(5-0)
whiteRwrong(5-0)

word word word word... word is bomb.... Keeeep tha votes comin. . . .... . . .. . . ..

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very well said^

opener P
flow P
structure P
pounches P
personals P
closer P

overall prophacyz

peace

return the favour to the battle in my sig

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uppin (4)........................c'mon niggaz...don't sleep on this shit dammit............................................ .................................................. ......................

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