10 lines max
no hate/crew/bs/unexplained/ etc votes
It is 4pm central time on Dec 25 now. Verses due in one hour or it is a DQ
I'll go first
G'Luck

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checkin in...

good luck man...

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Look at DNFs bio, Anutha kid reppin fuckin England again
Dun mess, or test da best or I'll "clock" ya wit Big Ben
Dumb Newbie Fuckin with the wrong MC
Like a lyrical midget, you'll never be able "step up" to me
You fuckin faggot I don't "O" "U" nothin so dun front wit dis
Turn ya name around and I FOUND How ya bang out hits
Your scared of me more then a pussy in the pound you little bitch
Cause my Murderouz Methodz will have ya runnin like grade schoolers playin ditch
I knocked this kid back daylight savings time he's too slow
Cause I'll murder this kid like shootin whales ina fish bowl

oh yea, dont want no haters voting on this...
Center Sight inperticular...
so no dickriding/hating bitches from PR...


holla back youngin'

Ima be serving this virgin like a surgeon with my murderouz methodz,
and make this loss his unlucky number like when reversing his record, (1-3)
and instead of nursing him better ima leave D.O.I DOA,
cos you could never be the ONE even if you re arranged NEO's name,
Definition Of Illness, not when you signed up for matching newbies,
You don’t care about AIDS your more scared of catching cooties,
And im known for pasting who im facing, but ya whole flow is wasting,
even Santa couldnt give you a good delivery with no location,
i always see W's like a western wind blowing a weather vain,
but your gonna C A L like the last 3 letters of ya name,





if you didnt catch the personals or wordplay... then dont vote...

aight both aight battles but tactical took this with better punches
and he probaly has more experience, tactical had good meta and wordplay, DNF ya verse was good for a noob, but if ya battled sum1 on ya level u probaly wud have wonb

vote Tactical

return tha favour here wit an honest vote tho
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101359

peace.

good battle here...

it would of been very close if D's punches actually landed. i mean, he had good ideas and shit but they didnt hit becuz they were all like these fucking hypothetical situations...like "if u flipped his record around......SO WHAT......and about if u rearranged neos name? what are u talkin bout dawg???

Tactic came pretty hard in his verse...real agressive and mean...and the flow down and the OU thing yet wasnt very hard hitting and landing it was some creative shit. your other punches hit hard tho to make up for that...

my vote:tactic

are you fucking retarded?
this loss gonna be unlucky for ya, 13 is unlucky...
you could never be the one, NEO/ONE(WON)
Santa gives deliverys, like delivery/flow, his flow is wack, no delivery cos he aint got a location...

damn... are you being dumb on purpose, or just voting based on post count?



can you please break down ya explanations, cos it dont even make sense,

lines about ima do this and that are played, dont yall even care about wordplay or personals? damn wtf...


what punches didnt land? please, name just 1... C A L (see a L, L as in Loss) tactiCAL, are you really that retarded?



sorry to have to do this but there aint 1 direct line in tacticals whole verse...


You fuckin faggot I don't "O" "U" nothin so dun front wit dis
Turn ya name around and I FOUND How ya bang out hits


how do i bang out hits? what did you find?


that was the only attempt at a direct line, saying ima kill you with this and that, that aint a punch or personal... it aint even creative...



so stop hating or dick riding, and vote honest...


can i ask a mod or someone to look at the first 2 votes plz

for real a vote should be based on:

punches:
personals:
wordplay:
multi's:
flow:
creativity:


can you honestly say i lost in wordplay or personals? did tactical have any multi's? every line i had multi's... which makes the flow better. and creativity comes with unique and clever punches, not ima do this and that to you... that aint direct...


and for the record i aint a newbie, dont let a post count fool ya...

punches: t
personals:t
wordplay:tie
multi's:t
flow:t
creativity:tie


overall tactic

peace vote for my battle in my sig

now i know your playing... back the fuck up...

do i need to report yall faggots to an admin?


i didnt know RB had this many dick riders and gay voters...

damn...

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Tactical's verse////////////////

Look at DNFs bio, Anutha kid reppin fuckin England again
Dun mess, or test da best or I'll "clock" ya wit Big Ben
~~~~~not really a meta..... simple bar....

Dumb Newbie Fuckin with the wrong MC
Like a lyrical midget, you'll never be able "step up" to me
~~~~another simple bar... not hitting hard at all
You fuckin faggot I don't "O" "U" nothin so dun front wit dis
Turn ya name around and I FOUND How ya bang out hits
~~~~~nice thought with the name....

Your scared of me more then a pussy in the pound you little bitch
Cause my Murderouz Methodz will have ya runnin like grade schoolers playin ditch
~~~~~~another missed punch

I knocked this kid back daylight savings time he's too slow
Cause I'll murder this kid like shootin whales ina fish bowl
~~~~ nice first line but the last coulda came harder

overall pretty simplistic verse....rate. 6.5/10

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DNF's verse//////////

Ima be serving this virgin like a surgeon with my murderouz methodz,
and make this loss his unlucky number like when reversing his record, (1-3)
~~good bar but the first line u shoulda had the opening rhymes "rhyme" wit the end of the bar.........get wat im sayin?

and instead of nursing him better ima leave D.O.I DOA,
cos you could never be the ONE even if you re arranged NEO's name,
~~~i like this line pretty nice diss..... even though he plays of neo


Definition Of Illness, not when you signed up for matching newbies,
You don’t care about AIDS your more scared of catching cooties,
****this is the BEST line in the battle**** an teh factor of my vote......... everyone rhymes newbie.. wit shit thats played of....nice job


And im known for pasting who im facing, but ya whole flow is wasting,
even Santa couldnt give you a good delivery with no location,
~~~~~bad bar... no sense


i always see W's like a western wind blowing a weather vain,
but your gonna C A L like the last 3 letters of ya name,
~~~alright i guess... not that hot

overall..harder hitting....................7.5/10

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final vote- DNF


I VOTE GOOD......please VOTE like this in my battles......aight ~1


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tactical hit harder.....
structure: tie
punches: tac
vote: tac.......
now plze return da favor at http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101406