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yo fuck all you bitches try'in 2 diss my style
an fuck deep thinkin dis aint no poetry meetin haha,
beotch! ya ima post dis shit wat u think, haha, dont blink

Song:
fuck deep thinkin i dont need emotion 2 b entriging/
see i sold my soul 2 da devil, im da hip hop demon!/
reviel ya pussys 4 what you is, poets dont speak ebonics/
you fake as philosephers cant read, need hookes-on-phonics/
fuck sick! i spit da Bubonic-Plaque, yall bitches want it/
itz ironic im smoken chronic yet focused and on a roll/
like Janet Jacksons #1 debut album im in "Control"/
my foes iz playa haterz, wit da faderz im leavin slow/
weezin like Darth Vador on tracks from smokin dro/
5-0! hell naw im 3 steps 4rm da law, a raw style/
call me a petifile, cause i fucked u kidz up, im buck wild/
mean while, u trickz iz stuck on da public enemy rep/
prechin social commentary! you fake ass Mos Defz!/
fuck yall, wit my last breath 2 spit ill rip into ur chest/
im doin yall a favor, cause 2 beat me, u must b heart-less/
cause im a hard-ass bitch, wit no morals an no standardz/
im cold hearted, ill light u fagotz up like Jack-o-Lanternz/
ima sore loser, diss me on da mike an get ur jaw shattered/
An dont diss my parents bitch cause like Urkle "FamilyMatters"/
wit temper tantrums i scare haterz stiff like Rigamortis/
battle'in dese homo bitches iz like race'in a Hare & Tortios!/
Mutha Fucker!

haha! beotch! u knew i would do it!
haha, dont act like u dont know who dis diss was 4
u mutha fuckerz know, dis is hip hop bitch save ur
deep moral lessonz an shit 4 manic depressentz
East Coast! NC!

needs brushing up on your punches this was an itro slash battle track and it was well delivered and recieved just needs to be brushed up a lil more conceise and consitant....other then that real ill drop

i agree. needs help. but i spose you got an alright idea. i do notice that i must change my style to fit this 'poetry' style that everyone seems to like... oh well. keep elevatin homes. no hate...

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