were battleing:

I speak in Ebonics, I smoke da Chronics, I aint illiterate, I don't need
Hooked on Fonics, my rhymes are deep, i make em up in my sleep,
well im countin white sheep wit lil Bo Peep, just watch em leap ova the
fence, they so dence, just keep jumpin, just keep pumpin tha thoughts
inta my head, write em down in lead on a piece of paper, there aint no
rhymes that are greater then mine, I write em one line at a time, they
gotta shine, gotta stick out, yo whatchu say bout me, I'll battle u it'll be
so e-z, I so good i could take out D-O doubble G, be like battlein a lady,
don't get a affended i aint Shady, Nah im just playin baby, don't get all
crazy on me. lets go smoke a tree, I cant see, dis smoke is blindin, i be
grindin dis weed, its so tight, hey yo you gotta light, bitch lets fight, yeah
i am white, so what your moms a slut, dont shut me down, i aint no clown,
just cause i got the hair dosent mean i dont care, bitch be fair, i be fuckin
Sonny and Shere, bitch there we go, that wasn't so hard, man why you be
actin like a fuckin retard, Pardon me, whatchu say, fuck you i already no your
gay.

freakyjay, weakly takin lyrics away, thinkin hes cool
meekly sprayin his rage and mispeakin like Ja Rule

prewrittin scripts he's ripped from previous hits
copy paste it in minutes, bitch needs his lyrics re-written

just remember homes, that was the only shit you had,
all december u sat alone, just to make Eminem mad

you stealin flows* like Turkey jokers and her mo' phone
needin your feelings stole, and merked for smokin alone

too bad, you cant implant a chant of rantin rhymes with timin
get hands clasped in spasms so they clappin at lines, dats mine.


* http://hairyken.hostingcentral.be/N...news=12/11/2003

Nookie took it, the other guy rhymed stuff well together but it was a freestyle about nothing, u didnt even attack this kid u just rhymed shit at the end of a sentence, and Nookie "Hits and rewritten" dont rhyme, try hits and rewrit.----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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uppin #4 peeps. fuckin vote would yas?? leave a link and ill drop one back on your shit.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ....................

Mc Nookie took this in a big way...
He had every category over the other rapper...
The guy "FreakJay" obviously had a pre written verse that was in
no way directed at his opponent and had no real rhyme scheme at all.
I can't say much for Nookie. He had all the necessities there.
A personal here and there, a meta or two.. not bad I guess..

Since I took the time would you mind?.....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101920

Vote Mc Nookie

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