bi detained - overated
lyrical killer - my fucking mom
mc nookie - alphabet acrobatics


'-Imagine That-'

*chorus*

Picture you were on top of tha game wit fame, '-Imagine That-'
Do everything you can to maintain like a high wire balance act
Fear sets in and bodies start sweatin bullets, '-Imagine That-'
Now tha dick that shot you regrets he pulled it, irratic acts
What if people really cared ta spare tha bullshit,'-Imagine That-'
Kids not scared or bewarin tha "cool kids", they'd have the backs
We'll never live in a perfect world it's just fun to '-Imagine That-'

*verse 1*

Everyone wonders how tha world goes round
Some say it's movement others relate sound
People all abuse it and everyday use it proud
See it as amusement play in confusion bound
But you'll never know what does lie underneath
Untill searched even to tha skin of earth's teeth
What is it you seek?, what is it we all hunt
I know it's not weed, filled in a phillie blunt
But still brain cells are killed, pain yells it's fill
It's the addiction that has my heart spilled
I Can't get out it's like I'm trapped, and wrapped
A Continuous inter-twinement of ganja and rap
Affiliates splinter mind-sets of bongs and yak
Really shits hinderin fine debts from bomb attacks
The president really spent all our nation's money
We won't notice for years when they think it's funny
It comes to a point in life where reality strikes
Every joint I light tears me from mortality's fight
Tha first ma'fucka you open ya mouth to had a gat
Freedom of speech?You'll die for it, '-Imagine That-'

*chorus*

Picture you were on top of tha game wit fame, '-Imagine That-'
Do everything you can to maintain like a high wire balance act
Fear sets in and bodies start sweatin bullets, '-Imagine That-'
Now tha dick that shot you regrets he pulled it, irratic acts
What if people really cared ta spare tha bullshit,'-Imagine That-'
Kids not scared or bewarin tha "cool kids", theyd have they backs
We'll never live in a perfect world it's just fun to '-Imagine That-'

*verse 2*

When it gets thick and thin I look at all the ways that I live
Fuckin life up blazin and shit, worries me about raisin my kids
Think about drinkin and the days that I did, just cravin a sip
I was bent I'd break in'a crib, Drove drunk great in tha whip,
But I crashed it when I was sober, I said "Aint that some shit"
Commit rape takin' some Cids, I'm lookin at the jakes they pigs
Trippin so bad I dropped 8 in they wigs, kept my pace wit Cigs
Clips empty tha race was rigged, sell bud an we lace tha twig
Some people look at others and think "They a waste of skin"
They just tryna make dem ends, they tryna escalade ta men
For themselves they fend, wolves out for blood in a savage pack
Wooden shelves that bend, a whole new reality '-Imagine That-'

*chorus*

Picture you were on top of tha game wit fame, '-Imagine That-'
Do everything you can to maintain like a high wire balance act
Fear sets in and bodies start sweatin bullets, '-Imagine That-'
Now tha dick that shot you regrets he pulled it, irratic acts
What if people really cared ta spare tha bullshit,'-Imagine That-'
Kids not scared or bewarin tha "cool kids", they'd have the backs
We'll never live in a perfect world it's just fun to '-Imagine That-'




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yo this was Nice man ood Open Mic.ya Structure seemed Nice and Consistant and ya flow was on Point All the Way though it......ya Chorus had Nice meaning first verse and ya Second seemed Different in flow and structure But i was ok......ya Topic wasn't That Great but ya Used it well....so all and all man this was pretty tight man.....peace....can ya Leave feedback on any of the open mics i have done thankz

thanks. will peep......
uppn.....

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Good open mic. One of the best here right now. I liked your wordplay. You've got skillz. Keep up.

nice multiz... good solid flow.... vocab was good too... likin it.... 7/10 overall....


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danm simmer down loc. the peice wass good keep it up

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A little long, had to push myself to read on..
..at times..
I'd say this piece contains some witty wordplay,
& generally nice lines, converted into a clean..
structure with a solid, consistant flow.
You ended the whole thing well, good finish.

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uppppn sum shit Dayum............

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The wordplay was off the hook.... I liked this piece...

8.9/10... I think the piece was practically flawless....

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