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technically the technicolor dream coat was pretty,
and the fire berathing dragon could topple a whole city,
or two...or three...is four too much of a number?
all i know is that the dragon has snapped out of slumber,
the bass drum kicks, the mind slips straight to oblivion,
above and beyond says the hooded minion,
the wind swirls my cape, the fire stings my eyes,
pipers cannot lure children when rats fall from the sky,
your thighs, they scream love to me,
the only nurturing home of the seven seas,
I conquered caspian,
took the pacific as my own!,
battled a giant lizzard and slit his gizzard,
my mind can increase the cahnce of a blizzard,
miser, miser, misery? kathy Bates hovering out me,
awakes my spirit,
I wield words like a katana and you know you should fear it,
the bong? i'll dear it,
a choire of angels? i can hear it,
tempest toessed are the seeds that are lost,
we can regain conciousness but at what cost,
where once was moss new frost rattles my cage,
teaching me to behave like a vietnamese slave,
the concaves...of my inner spirit,
little boy, you can touch, but i dont reccomend you get near it, the mariner of life? i steer it, passed the sirens who screech, yell magic as a mystical pastor I preech, they are screaming

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dude no offense but i wasnt really feelin that piece. work on some relevance to a topic, it sounds like u got really high and just wrote down some bullshit. ELEVATE

You need 3 links kid

or they WILL WARN U TOO... then close this thread...

Caesar on3

^ Leave feedback dont just freepost that atleast leave some kind of feedback for the man, Thanks.

and Yes You Do Need to leave 3 links or 3 names of people you left feedback to or this will get closed, Thanks.

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well kid... structure had me off at times... and ya bars was like... W.T.F. MATE??... I WAS CONFUSED... but kid you will get better just need a lil guidence for what you need to fix to make you better... i'm not the one to do it... i'm still elevating my self... even tho i am very gifted... but hey... everyone was just as worse are you are... don't let any cat bring down yo spirit... unless you just can't elevate... then u just need to spot... but u might have a light... i was feelin this piece tho... come back... check out some otha cats open mic's... and get the deal... good luck kid

Caesar - on3

Wasn't that good. Kinda reminded me of an extra whack canibus track but without the big words. wofk on ya sh-t.