10 - 15 Lines
No Crew
No Hate
No Bullshit Votes
No Feeding Off Lines
Votes Must Be EXplained

You Spitten First

checkin in this is gon be a cake walk...............................Holla at ya Boy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

hey yo...................

This bitch wanted a twist so he so he called on the 2 tymer//
lookin to win a battle but is too shy for a rhymer//
Dope supplier, Wheelin and dealin, Smokin on shit thats fire//
you is just a crack buyer, you gotta be addicted cause you smoke more rocks than Richard Prior//
Ya a denyer? Only to the fact that you'd rather have dick than vagina//
Faggot nigga, Want a gun war buy you don't even know what's a trigga//
I'm Pullin triggaz makin bitch niggaz retreat//
The only outcome you ever meet is defeat//
Bitch ass is weak, like all the little pussies just dyin to trick or treat//
Candy, is the only thing that makes you happy//
ya too nappy, You've just been found out dawg, ya style's not even rapping//
More like a nurcery rhyme, i do so much damage you'd forget about clolmbine//
Fact after fack this bitch believes in fables//
Wanted me to spit first just cause he isn't able//
Instead of even tryin to right take a nap watch Ann of green gables///

I'm out

This gonna be fun :-D
Anyways.....I'm Ch'Eck-"N". I'm posting in about Ten to Fifteen Minutes......

*Yawns
Yo, You Wanna Fight Kid? My Scripts'll You With A Fractured Chin//
As Weak As Tyme Is He Couldn't Even Be On Point Flowing On Top Of A Pyramid//
A Weak Blow'll Crack Yah Skeleton, So just give up..Yah Too Weak Black//
While I Stay Ill..I Could've Been On Love Connection And Still Wouldn't Find My Match//
My Punchlines'll Leave 2Tymer More 'Heart Broken' Then 'Owen's Back'//
I'm Up For Hand To Hand Combat And The Wrong To Ever Try To Fuck With//
I'll Bust Quick..While You Couldn't Even Spit Sick Suffering With Oral Syphillis//
Laying Sick Ass Scripts..That'll Leave Yah Weak Ass Tired And Outdone//
My Lines Just Begun, But Look..Quip 'Eats More Kids' Then Bitches Who Swallow The Cum//
Yah Done..Got Herbed And Bitched Without Any Physical Contact//
This'll Be Yah First DeFEET..So You Won't Be Able To Make A Walking Comback//
.
.
.
I'll Replace Yah Spine With A Gat...And If You Got Beef I Got Cha Back!!!

Opening: C
Punches: C
Personals: neither
Flow: tie
Structure: C
Vocab: tie
Closer:C

Merked...all I can say good battle C

Vote disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote.
-Cprogress

^Thanks man..Nice Vote You Got Their....Upping For Move Votes...

STOP SLEEPING ON THIS SHIT!!!!!!!!!

yo iight here deal 2 tymer your ok but you need better punchs but your still good dawg but im sry but my vote go 2 cquip had better punch lines but yo 2 tymer if you want in my crew holla at me

__________________
JR.delinquents

Goddammit, This Shits Madd Dum...This shits getting slept on like crazy..Uppin this once more again.....

this battle was very weak both need elevating a lot
though C won cuz he wasnt retarded and his punches made sense
he had better structure

he also had a couple of hard personals

vote C

i agree wit emerge here.....however some one must win and c quip gets my vote.

he had better wordplay and punches....basicly the other kid jus dropped alot worste......C wasnt too bad tho...jus played in my opinion.....

vote C-Quip

Opening - C................................
Punches - C..........................
Personals - none...............................
Structure - C...........................
Vocab - tie..................
Closer - C............................

Vote disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote.
-Cprogress

__________________

This battle goes to C.Quip for obvious reasons
His verse was actually worth looking at
2 Tymer had no Stucture what so ever....

Ya both need to work on Punches, Multies
2 Tymer ya need to work on mostly everything
No hate homie........Just bein straight honest

Vote=C.Quip

__________________

UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP PIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNGGGGGGGGGGGGGG PLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEAAAAAASSSSEEEEE

C.Quip wins for better and harder punches. ALso a better structure and flow. 2 tymer didn't have anythign in his rhyme that was like "Damn". Ya nah? Plkease drop a vote here. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102817