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Old 12-30-03, 08:25 PM   #1
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Peep this shit its straight fire.... its the best song i made so far: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/djwouzmusic.htm

and that dope beat is produced by me too
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Old 12-31-03, 01:31 AM   #2
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this was ok........guitar was too loud for me......lol, u said fuck or muthafucka bout 100 million times,lol.......flow needs a lil bit of work........lyrics was average.......nice emotion and production was pretty good......overall this was pretty good.........lol, last time I heard from you, you didnt do audio.........THIS IS A GOOD CHANGE BECAUSE TEXT IS FOR NO TALENT ASS CLOWNS
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Old 12-31-03, 07:55 AM   #3
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lol word . thanks for peepin man, good feedback about the flow, cuz i noticed that a lil too.
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Old 12-31-03, 08:58 PM   #4
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i tried peeping...
but shit wasnt working...
i'll try agian later...
sup wouzy...


LoL MFAC fo' Liiiiiffffeeeee



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Old 01-01-04, 01:16 AM   #5
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tracks koo........its all elevation......turn vocals up jus a LIL LIL bit

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Old 01-01-04, 01:25 AM   #6
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pretty nice here..flow was cool..beat is nice..lyrically there are no complaints my way...presence is cool..emotuion is good in this..prety nice job..peace
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Old 01-01-04, 10:51 AM   #7
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good feedback from yall, thanks for peepin

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i tried peeping...
but shit wasnt working...
i'll try agian later...
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LoL MFAC fo' Liiiiiffffeeeee



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SAL watsup man haha... u gotta peep this track its fuckin dope... MUTHAFUCKACREW


*vexicans are taking over*
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Old 01-01-04, 03:56 PM   #8
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Nice....
i heard it at low-fi, but try to spin shit faster next time

Good shit
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Old 01-02-04, 06:18 AM   #9
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thanks man
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Old 01-02-04, 06:35 AM   #10
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i thought that the rap itself wasnt that good i mean the lyrics were with out that certain somethin
i kinda sounded like you were yellin like a wierd rock song
the beat was dope i liked that
over all this wasnt to bad but you could have prolly made this one better

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Old 01-02-04, 07:21 PM   #11
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yeah, some parts of my lyrics are basic, other parts are better.... anyway thanks for peepin man..... btw i like that avatar
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Old 01-02-04, 07:59 PM   #12
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yayyy....deLivery voice is dopeness....
guess its a personaL preference....sounds Like your having a lil trouble spitting... vocaLs up a tad bit....Lyrics were cooL, f you like that sorta thing, and i DO like that sorta thing...

sounds sorta coo, needs polishing a lil bit...

nice, elavate always...

dope track!!!!!

Yeh, long time no see...
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Old 01-02-04, 08:30 PM   #13
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hahaa.... thanks man..... about the trouble spittin thats kinda true man, i fuckin yelled like a muthafucker in some parts , shit takes alot of energy if u a lazy mufucker like me
but hey, everything for a dope ass track right

mmmmmmmFAC is still alive bitches
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Old 01-04-04, 02:01 PM   #14
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upps for some moooooo
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