iight check in
10+ lines
ill spit first afta ya check in
no d/r votes
no one line votes explain ya reason

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iight heres ma drop..........

he agreed to battle the best and the greatest//
i knock tha pube hair off ya chest stop whackin it//
to fully clothed bitches on trading spaces//
ya neva gonna be like Tupac Shakur//
Put the keyboard down ya shit couldnt shock a ford//
U couldnt have me stocked shot or mocked by some trial rappers//
they some style slackers with Hugh Flinks laughter//
Fans dissappearing mamma's dont care//
they hatchin you to recieve a higher welfare//
hes the fat kid who loves the cake he rocks the mic//
so can afford to support his ass with a klondike//
come on mike get in the game ya dont know how much ya lack//
you couldnt get in hittin wit ken griffeys b-ball bat//
fill ya khakis full of toxic gasses you in the back seat//
Plastic bag over your head to shed ya constant fear of conflict//

c'mon goddamnit drop ya shit .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .........

Record 0-0.. oh shit that makes you the best?
Invest in a dictionary, it'l teach you the rest
And I suggest you learn to rhyme, don't waste my time
If this is how you text battle you must speak like a mime
I'ma make you an offer that you can't resist
I'll leave you with my old record in exchange for a kiss
But before you get all hard I'ma tell it like this
Pucker up and kiss my ass cuz you my new bitch
And I do like to whack off to Trading spaces
Get right up in the TV screen and aim for they faces
You happy now? You fucking clown- you ahouldnt of asked
And for the record while im doin it i slap my own ass
Ill pass on dissin you, shit you said it yourslef
Give it up bitch please and keep that shit on the shelf

iight uppin fo some votes............................................. .......
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iight vote=vitalz
more punches
flow was better
structure was bit betta
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iight uppin2x for some more votes dont sleep on this shit
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Uppin for some votes.,.,.,.,..,,..,,.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Vote please .................................................. .................................................. ...........

this battle was wack as hell.....what mic was trying his hardest to punch and all his hits never got nowhere, i mean your structure was koo, but your concepts your imagery your skill level was really not doin it.....

Vitalz didn't impress me either....i mean dawg you were rhymin some basic shit and you were dissin yourself like most of the way through the verse....when you did punch him it was like a lil slap on the wrist.....however you did punch him though and that's what counts....vote Vitalz...

sorry i can't poll vote but i'd appreciate it if y'all dudes could return the favor on my battle....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102139

iight uppin fo more votes............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .....................

goddamnit peepz vote on this .................................................. ................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .....

both of you need to elevate, you lines were weak, but i give this to vitalz his was still eeehhhh, but its better then the other guys. and the other guy fed on vitalz verse in some parts.

so vote vitalz

but both of you seriously need to elevate

return the favor go vote honestly on my battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102470

yo thanx fo tha vote but it didnt show up on tha poll/.................................................. .................................................. ...........