10 lines
i set up
you spit first
usual rules

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this is my check in..but i told u in ur call out..u spit first..and u agreed...so stick with tha rules man....drop..ill drop after you

i'll PM you when my verse is ready an you must drop about 1 or 2 minutes after me,

no feedin an a blind spit!!!

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THOG skipped the life cycle feeble remade ya after slipped by desciple
13 toy'd wit your ass so much, they oughta call em Michael,*




slow down, becasue soon ur keyboards gonna waste away,**
mods fixed it though, you only regestered day before yesterday,
is be called the secretary, because of the losses i adminstrate,
this battle is not the one, in which you would like to participate,
Please...This bitch whined about the new Undefeated Tendencies,***
my ryhmes are so infectious, they like malairia, im spreadin disease,
i cover my raps from all angle, without geometic perspective its pointless,
you ryhmes would be more effective, if you used invilsible ointment,



*he was pinkslipped by 13th disciple, an feeble gave him his name back, an his alias is THOG reborn.

**his profile, he obviously obtained posts of a mod??


***he was moanin in crew forum because his crew name got changed,

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sickness from a distance..its not so..thats why u spit across sea's
fucka black cat,
like bad crusifictions,not even jesus would wanna cross me
try keepin rb alive,but after this battle ur the only one diein
burn a box for fun,
but its only fun when i brake ya bones,n fold u inside it
like ya sound click,ya said it ya self,u need a new name,how bout slave
standin over ya rightful place,
like ya own grim reapers lookin for ya,even ya names just waitin over ya grave
im sick and tired of u fucking newbs,who actully think your vets
my only advice for u is,
u prolly aint even hit pubertry yet,u dont got skill anyways,just stick ta text
007 gets use ta beatin newbs,just remember this as the day ur losein ta god
get played over n over agian,
like shity re runs from old movies,like replayes of james bond

aight people both verses are in...vote this shit up................................................ ...............................................up1

007 took this battle...He had nice punches and personals...I liked your line (Slipped by 13th but feeble gave ur name back) Nicely done...Close battle..Thog is no1 to toy with but still Thog u could came harder and didnt - v/ 007

well.....ok.....

007 Let me be honest....ur verse was ok....nuttin great-good personals but u lacked a decent deliverance of them.....your flo was ok....a lil choppy but on key in some parts....your structure was off because u split ya verse wit quotes....bad idea....

THOG-no hate but what the hell was that?...I've seen u spit before, and to be honest after i read 007's verse i thought u were goin to destroy him.....but u came horrific....your structure was horrible for one...i couldn't grasp a ryhmin scheme and ya punches were kinda soft....i dont kno what happened here.

im confused but.....non the less i give this one to 007- no hate to either....but u guys shoulda come harder than this.....

Lol TheHandsOfGod I Called You Out
The Fuck Was That Verse?
Double Beat You Bad.
He Hit With Punches In Your Hand You Hit With Nothing
God Damn Where Is Your Skill? I Heard shit About You And You Droped That God DawMg...
Vote = Double 0 Seven

He Threw Solid Punch.

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um...yeah but doubles punches are bull shit..cuz he said feeble gave me my name back..thats bull shit..cuz feeble had nothing to do with my name ....first thing only admins can do it..and the admins gave me my name back.....


keep uping...............................

one of my punches was a lil off, i know that you an feeble are tight thats all.................................... jus thought it was him.........uppin..........

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Damn....

007's was aight, harder punches, some aight personals, just an average verse...... nothing special

THOG's shit i expected to be better but it wasn't, he had a weak verse, weak punches, an aight floh but lacked alot........

Vote: 007

no hate

slept battle..... peep it
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...41&pagenumber=2

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Pretty Decent Battle

007-
Flow was good, punches were good vocab was good a lot of creative thoughts i liekd itm it was fairly witty
Your opener was good you then kinda sloed down but then kept a consistant hard hittin lines after bout the 4th line
Overall good verse

THOG- Good verse I felt the flow was great but some of the punches just werent wtty or catchy, like 007 your verse got better as i read on and your closer was good but played the name thing has been used a lot. But good verse

I'm gunna go with 007 on this though he had a more consistant verse that struck a little harder

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