5-6 bars (10-12 lines)

no crew hate d/r or fan club votes

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26 post a day...like a dude holdin a clock u have time on ya hands
joker is a whack man....he now sweats whackness from his glands
u ill???its impossible like armless kids tryin to paint pictures
ya rhymes wouldnt be worshiped even if u spit bible scriptures
in this battle im the ace and i got this joker scared
his last hope is sellin his album to the hearing impaired
no clothes to wear...this bum is homeless he really is from the streets
ya rhymes pack no heat...ya best win came against a dude wit 80 defeats
even though no one likes u bin laden made u a 100 foot statue
why?? terrorist destroy what they dont like.............................
....................since there aint no more towers now they can hit u
with this battle jokers career is endin like jam master jay’s
first loss....like a mute kid joker now has nothing to say

His structure is lop-sided, he gots only 1 punch but first u gotta find it
My rhyme's are mentally effective to kill slowly i don't play wit da kind-shit
l frown down on the weak like you when I attack with arched eyes
e.coli VS joker this cats history he belongs somewhere in da archives
Nigga dis Ohio mother fucker its time for you to meet the best of the best
No wonder this cat ecoli is so fucking retarded hes a product of an incest
You're warm piss at best...I'll spray you with hottness penetratin ya flesh
My gat wil hit you with bullets like Big Bret Favre puttin 4 on your chest
Watch the disection..E.coli is ryhmin wit perfection prickin like a lethal injection
Nigga acts like hes hardcore but never seen war like air force reserve veterans

uppin 4 votes on this and that lil herb tha killa kid cant vote cause we got beef and he'll prolly try to hate on me

uppin (1)

lets get some votes in here please......vote honestly


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dont sleep on this people vote and leave links do whatever just vote honestly

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joker - good punches. ok personals. awesome flow. nice closer and opener. awesome drop
8.6/10

e - good punches. good personals. ok flow. good closer. ok opener. pretty good drop
7.7/10

this was a good battle, but it looks like joker's streak is going on... ::knock on wood::

vote - joker

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hmm...

this battle was close. both verses were pretty good, but i think joker had better punches and wordplay. the flow was a little better too, made it better to read.

vote: joker

i take time on your battles...take time on mine

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yo thanks for votin but can we get some better breakdowns........................................ ..uppin(3)

I'd have to go with e.coli on this one. He had better, more creative punches:

"26 post a day...like a dude holdin a clock u have time on ya hands
joker is a whack man....he now sweats whackness from his glands
u ill???its impossible like armless kids tryin to paint pictures
ya rhymes wouldnt be worshiped even if u spit bible scriptures"

Those need a little rewording but they're still pretty good.

Both had a good flow. CLose battle.



http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103093

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punches-e
flow-e
structure-e
metas-joker
sustainment-both
enjoyment-both
wit-joker

nice battle..i jus found it hard to catch a flow on Jokers
pz

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e-coli-creativity... the clock line was tight.. that had me readin....
..also teh painting pics line
e-coli-flow
joker-dept,vocab

~~so tehn its jsut personla opinion.i prefered e-cloi verse more....

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Uppin 4 some votes please breakdown a lil better
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