Honestly - My Psychology Embodies Fresh MC Technology. .
Mathematical Addict Mixed With Proper Biology. .
Thas The Formula For The Dopest, My Arithmatic. .
Finishes Sentences Quick, Ya Spittin' Simplistic Shit. .
Jus A Preposition Preps You For A Position As An Apprentice. . Demolishin' Ya Exsistence, My Persistance Smashes All Apprehension. .
My Penship Sails In Ink, Witness You Fail, Exstinct. .
Jus My Instinct Makes You Rethink That Cancelled Trip To The Precinct. .
Animalistic Tendacy, Ballistically Rip Shit Towards The Enemy. .
Ya Frantic, Panic Mode When I Explode Ya Boy's Lymph Nodes. . Even A Pimp Knows, When To Kick Hoes Like You When Ya Shit Blows. .
Cardiovasculars Shatter, Vernacular Pattern Of Attackin. .
You Call This Ya Life, Get To Packin, This Shit Is Rappin. .
I'ma Instigator, Words Create Gasps Of Breath, Respirator Needed. .
See The Last Of Steps Before Earth's Depleted, Equator's Heated. .
My Thoughts Is Seekin', Seapin' Through Vessels Quicker Than Semen. . Bitch, You Lucky You Still Breathin'. . .
You Left Leakin' Mornin' Or Evenin', Words Creepin Like Hell's Demons. .
You Failed Even, When You Was Writin' Battle Verses For Rehearses. .
Watch Me Kick It, Top Of The Dome N Reverse Ya So Called Lyrical Curses. .
Spritual Wordsmith, My Words Lift Ya Wack Ass Outta Depression. .
Second Guessin' Will Leave You Stretchin' In The Ambulance, Rhyme-Proof For Protection. .
What Is You ? I'm Stressin' Lookin' At This Collection Of No Skills. . Yes, I'm Talkin Bout Ya Whole Crew, No Will Gets You Killed. . Quicker Than A Straight Edged Pledged Christ Affliate Tryna Complete A Drug Deal. .
I See You Salivatin At My Lines Created, I'm Sensin' The Hatred. . You Attentive To Basics. . .
While I'm Bendin' Mics With Wisdom In The Basement. .
You Can Play Sick, While My Metaphorical Rhyme Presence Turns Residents To Peasants. .
Evidence Of My Complex Anatomy, Prevalent Through My Academy. .
Of Thoughts, Me Boss, You Lost, My Illness Can't Be A Plague. . Cause I'm The Only One This Sick Walkin' With Bubonic Legs. .
My Knowledge Surpasses You Masses Of Dumbasses. .
Who Take Classes To Pass As A Gangsta, When You Can't Even Pass-a-Fist. .
You Weak Dude, I'll Eat You, Heat Crews N Speak To. .
The Less Fortunate Who Can't Be Heard With They Scorchin The Meak Fools. .
My Thesis Pushes Past Barriers Via Telekinesis. .
Fuck The Pre-Tense, We See Shit From The Past More Than Reruns On The Weekends. .
Ya Fake Like Expressionless Impressionist. .
My Pen Pressures Every Letter To Better My Mind Severing Spits. . Yes I'm, Clever With This, Never Not Hot Shit. .
Settin' Mics Ablaze With My Crazed Word Of Mouth Pyrotechnics. . Spiral Wreckage Circulates Through Mind States, I Create. .
A Notion That Collaborates With All Motion N Changes The Human Race. .
I Establish A Balance Of Malice And Physical Prowess. .
An Unmatched Talent, Defeat Every Challenge N Repeat Till I Stand Atop The Mountain. .
Lyrics Close To Bein' Holy, I Drowned My Words In The Fountain. . I'm Wishing Well, Penny Downed, Many MC's Dropped N I'm Still Countin'. .
I Possess A Process Only Accessed By The Grace Of Up Above. . Fucka Slug, I'll Pierce Skin With The Fiercest Of Rap Lyrics Till I Draw Blood. .
You Can't Even Dare To Compare This Rare N Once In A Lifetime Being. .
Who's Words Bring Sight To The Unseeing And Breath To The Unbreathing. .
Heavy Doses Of Potions Of Dopeness, My Prognosis Focuses On My Spits. .
Ya Bogus Like Hocus And Pocus, Left With Multipleclerosis. .
Now Tell Me Who Controllin' N Holdin' N Moldin' The Mind Blowin' Shit ?
. . . That'd Be Me.

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REPLIED TO:

ClassX/Nobull - Hot Cypher
YJ - Eyes Of A Young Nigga
Rule - Life Made Up Of Wants

Yes, I Kno, The Structure is FUCKED. . But Trust This. . I Wrote This Shit Last Night Without A Beat. . Then I Was Testin Beats N This Shit Goes To DJ Premier's "Above The Clouds" and "My World", and The Blackstar "Theives In The Night" Beat. . I Was Surprised. . So Critique It Well. . I Kno It's Long. . But Ya'll Read Word Perfect's Drops. . Pzz.

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Good Piece, It had a lot of good detailed lines and some really good rhymes The structure was off but your rhyme scheme made up for it and easy to follow, so you did good man keep it up pz

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

Structure was "Iffy" but flow was sick along with your rhyme scheme... I liked this piece alot and i give you much props for it

-uno

oh yeah... 8.55/10

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yeah this was alright here.....your structure was ok, it could use some work though...but you had some good vocab though....you had some good multies in this....the flow in this was good, it stayed on point through out it....overall a good piece...keep at it.

Up.

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yo i was feelin it.i liked the multis and some mettaz in there.also i liked the punches in there.keep it up like that.

not bad good rymes bad flow. and it kinds of sound like some thing the wu tang might do. like some time it dosnt make any sence. but it dose rym well

Damn, tha' was a fuckin ill verse...I like ya multi's, wordchoice, tha works...structa definetly needs work tho....keep this shi' up, an ya will have it mastad.........

yeah i read this, its dope..the structure was kinda fucked up, but the vocab & multies in this was ill..long as hell but its, kinda hot when you read it..hott as hell for a key
i really liked the way you ended it too

one..

Yeah. . I Kno The Structure's Fucked. . Thas Jus On This Piece Tho. . Don't Mistake This For My Everyday Writing's N Shit Like That. . It Flows Perfect To The Beats I Have. . Thanks For The Feed So Far Tho. . Pzz.

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Lil Bump.

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Yeah...Nice shit breh....A lil too long tho...But i think since its good to read, it doesnt make it bad....

U have good a good multie sense...I allso preffer to write my songs like this, But, After doing it so log and so many times...I got sick of it and fergot what was really important about writtin....

Vocab, Personaly, I didnt find anythin rong.....Some people will always vocab is a lil poor, wen really it isnt...

Nice piece...