CARSONJETX2 i pound foes, like "porno on the radio" ya "sound blows",
stop guzzlin "cum", like "people wit KaZaa"...you "down-loads"...
i clown hoes, and ima leave this hyped fool schorchin,
this fag always has his "tongue out for balls" like "michael jordan"..
you might be borin, ima put this in audio and smoke a track,
"grab ya spinal chord and laugh"...then claim that im "holdin back"..
blowin gats, put "my verse on a plate" and CARSON will get a "taste of fate",
ya lines are all gay wit no quality......just a waste of space...
brutal lyrics, im ready n willing to bruise you bitches,
i got CARSON in my "cross hares" like "rabbits wit cruci-fixes"!...
i'll make you swallow your pride, and make you choke on your own vomit,
im spittin ill, and you have "less qoutables" than a "no comment"..
yeah ILLESTSPITTA got a gun, ill spark it then youll leave,
i "drop this ho"...like a "garder wit the parkisons disease"..
spit flames all day, This CARSON is gettin slain by satan,
you got ya "head in the clouds" like gettin "brains from space men"..
I have a suggestion, BITCH Now pay attention closely/
Im putting my skill for sale so go out to da grocery/
Pick up a bottle of hennesy so that you can gain my traits/
Re live my past so you can make my mistakes/
Do all that shit and maybe you could be recognizable/
I doubt it because STILL your skills would be deniable/
My flow carries emotion, your flow carries nothing/
So giv up on life and the dream that ONE DAY! You might be something…../
Before lashing out at me, I want you to stop n think/
Look @ you... Your rhyme worst than MURDA INC..../

YEA BITCH IF U GOT PROBLEM HIT ME BACK AIGHT BITCH CUZ I'LL LYRICALLY KILL U AIGHT BITCH 1

Lmaoo

This Was Nice
It Had Some Nice Lines ButSome Lines Were Only Attempts

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a lot of nice comparitive punches, some hard ones i liked the "drop the ho" line, youve definately got potential as a battle emcee. dunno who those guys are but they got clowned like a 3 ring circus. you should equalise your bars if you wanna make this audio and up yourt vocab just as little as well.

i love diss skits thats why i reply mostly to them, an yo homie this1 was tight yo, yo wordplay was good and yo flow was ok, keep produce-ing skits yo, 8/10