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chapter two life of an
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at age of 16 starting selling beans at the rave sence
picking fights just to stay mean glocks in back packs to protect 50 stacks if you know what that means you know i made mad green didnt sell weed own no tripple beam oh no let go oh no hell no oh no so slow oh no to fast and if i keep living my life this way how long is it going to last 2 years later still knee deep in the game went though bad times and started felling the pain couldnt change my ways remaining the same but still ready to attack any cat that was slack 5 $ short on a 10 stack split the wig back show up to your furnel dressed in black thanks for looking just free styling with no beat at work hope you like. send the feed back and cheack out these other cats. rapper song s.r. drink liquor from a chalice rule a life made of want liba dee cow tipping Last edited by palmetto : 01-03-04 at 04:04 PM. |
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You need to leave 3 links or 3 names of people you left feedback to or this will get closed, Thanks.
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short stuff, you know what multis are, the topic was unoriginal, the "oh no" tpye hook was wack, you need to up your vocab and pick something you have experienced personally. add some images of what it is your trying to paint as well.
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not really that tight this cud av been alot better...structure was wack n theme was blah but flow was gud....up ya vocab abit n keep droppin......pz
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