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hating allowed/d-ridin allowed

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ayo man ima kill dis bitch/
call her kim cause ima slit her wrists/
dis bitch done blow so many dudes like birthday candels/
i dont evn know why she challenged me/
thats like a dude wit no tougne eating her pussy/
after i beat dis slut ima rape her by sticking a razer blade up her butt/
last night i had dis hoe like donavan mcnabb/
spread eagle postion/
man dis bitch dont wanna go to war/
she need to o back to being a 5th street hor/
after i fucked her den i showed her door/
next day here she come and she wants some more/

kill who...and kill what?
you're a youngn and you're dumb as fuck
your metas and punches sucked
I would'nt cop your album if the price reduced to a buck
you're on fire boy, and don't nobody wanna touch ya
probably cuz u druel, and you define what's a sloppy structure
fuck ya... similies, your rhymes for a nursery
some body birp this bitch and throw this baby to sleep
before he remembers that I stole his sheep................
gimmie my fourth lost cuz it don't matter how hard I may come
yall d-ride most of the time so my battle record is over and done
i'm not sure if it's that I'm a gurl or yall comprehension is premature
yall who can... leave posts in my favor but don't vote now that's immature

Anybody who is a real artist would know I never post bullshit but yet I have a 0-3 record.....

Yall like to freestyle opinions and shit that's not the business
I'm sick of trying,on this bitch
The one thing about this is I can't kill you for your half ass opinions.
killin is way more fun, then letting you halfway read my pieces and then tell me I'm weak.

If you don't understand what I've just wrote and why well click on search and look at the battles I've been in and ask yourself does 0-3 look right to you. and if that doesnt get you look at some of these other battles and see what weak/played as rhymes are brought to the table but yet they have 7-0/9-1/6-3
that's bullshit all because yall forget not to freestyle your votes.


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"THIS IS NOT ANY MANY MINI MO....STOP D_RIDIN AND VOTE"

yo, i cant vote yet, but oCANti straight blew this shit up. tight rhythem and and...oh shit...IT RHYMED!!! homeboy needs to take lessons from the oCANti, might learn a little sumptin sumptin 'bout writing.

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I wasn't feelin' this battle that much at all, neither flow did I like, but Ocanti won this, she came much stronger, Fyreboys rhymes didn't even rhyme, most of them at least.
You both need to look at other em'cees threads and see how they spit, keep elevatin' ya.

Return Da fava and vote on this..

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103798

I wasn't feelin' this battle that much at all, neither flow did I like, but Ocanti won this, she came much stronger, Fyreboys rhymes didn't even rhyme, most of them at least.
You both need to look at other em'cees threads and see how they spit, keep elevatin' ya.

Return Da fava and vote on this..



http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103468

Well I see the battle like this
Open: O'canti came harder with the first two lines his did not grab me.

Punches: O'canti "Your metas and punches sucked
I would'nt cop your album if the price reduced to a buck" aiight

"thats like a dude wit no tougne eating her pussy/
after i beat dis slut ima rape her by sticking a razer blade up her butt/" hot garbage trying to knowledge


Metaphors: Nobody Really


Closer: O'canti "i'm not sure if it's that I'm a gurl or yall comprehension is premature yall who can... leave posts in my favor but don't vote now that's immature" The shit was original and a new concept the other guy babbled about fucking her that shit is mainstream hot garbage.

Winner: oCANti murked this nigga

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Ayo why would yall make dick ridin and hate votes allowed thats bullshit this battle sucked so ima say neither one of u bitches won

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This battle was alright, but...

Fyreboy: Your verse was wack. You had decent wordplay, no metas, decent punches, and minor creativity, but your shit was pointless.

Ocanti: Your verse was pretty good. Nice punches, nice wordplay, not really much metas, and good creativity. I enjoyed your vers more than Fyre's.

Vote: (even though you said not to) Ocanti

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Fyreboy
..Not as bad as everyone says..
U lacked punches&personals though..
Lacked as in..u tried..but they didnt work.
Also add more overall complexity.
Not to bad..
Overall ok

Ocanti
Basically that goes for u to..
But you take this battle, by punchin harder..
You just came a little bit better.
Improve your text.
Overall ok

Vote: Ocanti

Please click here to vote &Return the favour...

Ocanti! You came through big time here baby!
Good battle from the both of you but Ocanti was on point with her rhyme scheme and her punches were witty and hard hitting.
Fyreboy you dropped decent too but the structure is what seperated the two of you. Your bars were uneven and hard to read and that took a lot away from your drop.
Vote Oanti

I vote.......You vote......That's Fair.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103997