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liba dee
posiedon


news is anotha way to illusionate the mind to their design/
sole controller, got you readin wit yo hands cuz u blind/
yeah, da livin dead is confined, life in complete darkness aligned/
feelin terror when u see da sunshine, eyes feelin curcumcised/
the media only tells certain information dat sells ratings /
all da stories are made up to boost dat moral like extacy deprived/
to seperate da human brain in two sides; who to believe, only/
one right, your instinct, followed eversince birth till ya die/
breaking news is anotha name for cops, dat show were peeps/
in da minority get pushed, bodyslamed, and elbowed/
lookin like a payperview with no holds and barriers, gettn scarier/
deaths, suicides, and strapped bombs, trigger a nuclear war fest/
da raven's nest is da next special effect, only one time, quiet on;
da set; the propanda ready to be letha as texas with an inject/
straight aimed at da cerebral cortex to infect da mind, left behind/
by da tales of a system network connected to lurk in da heads/
of men, like rogain, enough said when you old like malone/
let da t.v do its magic, got u like a drone, stuck to a place u call/
home.

hmmm..interesting concept..dont' see many songs about the news unless the guy making the song was in the news for something...

for the concept I give you an 7.5....b/c it is a kind of overdone concept...I mean it's original, but you played it out in that song...u made it sound more important than it really is...

ur rhymescheme and flow was nice....your multis didn't exist tho


you could have used more wordplay...

decent overall though

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This was alright here i thought.....your structure in this was pretty good through out the piece....You had good flow in this, it stayed on point through out the thread, never really got off....you should try adding some multies though to make this better...but keep at it.

i basically agree, compexity is the main issue,, obviously the multis,, but also wordplay n metas.... you got the flow... and structure and vocab was decent so.....pZ

..decent drop..by far your best work...although the structure was kind of mixed up...other than that..your flow was at your best..as I've seen...your vocab was a lright...your content was also decent..good drop..

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