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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
brethren 5 100.00%
adagio 0 0%
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Old 01-05-04, 04:34 PM   #1
adagio
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adagio vs. brethren

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10-15 lines
usual rules
check in when ya see this


checked in
 
Old 01-05-04, 04:36 PM   #2
adagio
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ill spit after ya have checked in................................................ .....

checked in
 
Old 01-05-04, 04:39 PM   #3
Brethren
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check in, due in no more than one hour! MAKE SURE YOU READ THIS, I don't want this battle taking all month.

O yea, go ahead and drop
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Old 01-05-04, 04:46 PM   #4
adagio
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Ive got an open mind 24/7//
You shouldnt battle anymore just give up//
Like your momma said its better safe than sorry//
I took her advice, I wore a condom when I fucked her//
I felt for her, she dont need another son like you//
When you came out the world was in shock//
The worlds ugliest baby, so tha doc slapped ya mom//
Go crawl back under ya stone before ya get stepped on//
Im gonna smoke you like I would canibus//
Just Get out of here, heres some coin go catch the bus//

hurry up and spit, aint got all night
 
Old 01-05-04, 05:03 PM   #5
Brethren
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Ok, the only way you'd possibly win, is if people read my verse, and mistake is for yours,
How can you fuck, when your dick is as big as apostrophed words?
I'm harrasing this bitch, like he was a woman working in the office,
Accomplih literacy dude, before you attack with that nonsense,
Like Jennifer Lopez, I can still beat you with half-assed,
I could speak fucking gibberish, and you still couldn't match that,
You're shitty like a trash-bag, I'm still on the wonder,
How you could beat anybody, your verse needs a plunger,
And just to crush you I'm go out with a bang, shut your eyelids,
Oddjob faggot, get a hobby, and a lolly-pop, so then I can kill you like a virus.
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Old 01-05-04, 05:30 PM   #6
Brethren
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alright, ready for votes
Bitch.
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Old 01-05-04, 06:32 PM   #7
adagio
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lookin for some votes up in here.....................................

uppin...................................(1)
 
Old 01-05-04, 07:12 PM   #8
SaM sKILLeT
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Quote:
Ive got an open mind 24/7//
You shouldnt battle anymore just give up//
Like your momma said its better safe than sorry//
I took her advice, I wore a condom when I fucked her//
I felt for her, she dont need another son like you//
When you came out the world was in shock//
The worlds ugliest baby, so tha doc slapped ya mom//
Go crawl back under ya stone before ya get stepped on//
Im gonna smoke you like I would canibus//
Just Get out of here, heres some coin go catch the bus//

Adagio.... The best advice I could give you would be: Learn how to rhyme.
Only your last 4 lines rhymes..... That's all I'm gonna say

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Ok, the only way you'd possibly win, is if people read my verse, and mistake is for yours,
How can you fuck, when your dick is as big as apostrophed words?
I'm harrasing this bitch, like he was a woman working in the office,
Accomplih literacy dude, before you attack with that nonsense,
Like Jennifer Lopez, I can still beat you with half-assed,
I could speak fucking gibberish, and you still couldn't match that,
You're shitty like a trash-bag, I'm still on the wonder,
How you could beat anybody, your verse needs a plunger,
And just to crush you I'm go out with a bang, shut your eyelids,
Oddjob faggot, get a hobby, and a lolly-pop, so then I can kill you like a virus.

Brethren, you rhymed, so that's a plus. work on your punches, man, they ain't hittin. Try and work some personals into your verse next time.... Good job though

Vote: Brethren. Overall better verse.
 
Old 01-05-04, 07:16 PM   #9
Brethren
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I know this was just enough to beat him, I don't wanna waste material on weak kids, uppin

Wait till I get a battle with a Elite, I'm drop some crazy shit
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Old 01-05-04, 08:08 PM   #10
adagio
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uppin
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100 characters blah
 
Old 01-05-04, 08:39 PM   #11
Brethren
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Let's get some fucking votes please............................................ ....
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Old 01-06-04, 01:42 PM   #12
adagio
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its not the greatest battle but can we get some votes in her please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Old 01-06-04, 03:42 PM   #13
Brethren
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How about we make it first to 2 votes, at this rate, it'll take about another month. Just Kiddin. Uppin this shit, vote, kwit fucking sleepin
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Old 01-06-04, 05:08 PM   #14
Brethren
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5th Fucking UP, this is fucking redicilous, I've voted on 10-20 fucking battles, and I'm repayed with one, what the fuck is this
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Old 01-06-04, 06:51 PM   #15
Tyler Durden
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Uhh.. Is It Me... Or Did Adagio's Verse Not Ryhme....

Punches....Clearly Breth...Tha Plunger.. And "" Lines
Flow...Breth
Not Really Any Personals....
Creatvity/ Wordplay....Definately Breth

Vote-Brethren

Yall Need To Vote On This Battle....Brethren Deserves Tha Win
 
 


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