aiight
i set up
you spit first
10 lines
no crew votes,
hate votes,
feedin,
etc etc

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you gonna check in an spit or what.............................................. .................................................. ........................................

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Yeah consider this my check in..
I'll drop in about 3 minutes..
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007 is wack, overpraised middle weight.. & all he says is stupid..
The line above this, did a better job at dissing me, then you did..
Would throw a personal, but this kids character is utterly dead..
U'll get 1 vote..
.......Thats one more then when u applied in the Center thread..
I'll lay off the personals i might leave him nameless..& nought...
..How i know? look at his name..it reflects of average thought..
Realize & see the only opponent i have yet to conquer is myself..
For that to apply to u..go & delete all ur alias stored on ya shelf..
Kid thought just cause a took a while I was brainstormin mad...
..Research for personals?..u dont have a personality...thats sad..

Do well...

who's this kid??? shit, 5 wins, but he's still childs play,
he just here to up my win column, like aeroplane trays,
this 'straight ace', runs with a 'pack', that dosent exist,
like his location, after i give his loss record a quick edit,*
Ironic 7 shadow'queen gettin merk'd in daylight, (crew)
This kid could drop on mt.evrest-he still aint same height,
battlin me, the price to pay, a lot more than out of pocket,
it aiight i got the votes, like im george bushes ballot boxes,
this kid is only gonna shine for a second, like flickerin lights,
Win after Win after Win, peeps like you turnin me into a website,


*he from 'edit'
**his crew 7 shadows in his profile an sig, aint on RB

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Uppin..1
Uppity for poll votes..
Poll ur vote, leave a link & favour will be returned..
Ohyeah..with Center in my drop i mean Central
..the crew he reps.

Straight Ace- Good bar structure, created good flow and rhythm....a fair amount of wordplay n' some clever personals...I liked the verse....

double-o seven- your flow was a lil' off at points, some of your words weren't even rhyming kid....wordplay attempts were kinda' weak....

Ace took this one...

vote=Straight Ace

peep my battle w/ Echo...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104311

I've seen both these cats do alot better...

007 came with some nice metas...
But, really only one punch that was tight, (the "edit" line).
Everything else, despite the nice wordplay, landed soft.
Probably cuz you were stretching for a couple of those...
(the "shadow/queen-everest/height" line is an example...I get it, but it's forced as shit)

Ace takes this by the skin of his teeth...
The punches were harder and the wordplay had more wit and humor in it...
That's really about all that seperates these two verses.

Ace, by a tiny amount.

Peace

Holla back...

Vote here!

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Ace- Your flow was good and had harder punches and the opener was dope

007- You came weak at the start. Had some good personals tho
But I thought your flow was off

Overall Ace had the better verse
If I could vote it would go to Ace


Ohh and Ace go poll vote in my battle that you posted in you forgot too thanks

this was a close battle but because of that finishin line for ace i gotta go wit him nice shit both of ya

vote ace

plz return favor vote at http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...655#post1058655

or the one in my sig or both thnx

Ace...ncie flow...simply rhyming

Would throw a personal, but this kids character is utterly dead..
U'll get 1 vote..
.......Thats one more then when u applied in the Center thread..

and

Kid thought just cause a took a while I was brainstormin mad...
..Research for personals?..u dont have a personality...thats sad..
^^^both funny

i felt ace got this...i didnt really think 007 punches were that great

v/Straight Ace

if u wudnt mind
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104467

007 is wack, overpraised middle weight.. & all he says is stupid..
The line above this, did a better job at dissing me, then you did..
^^^heh...nice punch
Would throw a personal, but this kids character is utterly dead..
U'll get 1 vote..
.......Thats one more then when u applied in the Center thread..
^^^lol....nice punch
I'll lay off the personals i might leave him nameless..& nought...
..How i know? look at his name..it reflects of average thought..
^^^hmm...ok wordplay, but weak punch
Realize & see the only opponent i have yet to conquer is myself..
For that to apply to u..go & delete all ur alias stored on ya shelf..
^^^eh....ok punch
Kid thought just cause a took a while I was brainstormin mad...
..Research for personals?..u dont have a personality...thats sad..
^^^weak closing...need a better punch


who's this kid??? shit, 5 wins, but he's still childs play,
he just here to up my win column, like aeroplane trays,
^^^....what? i must have missed something...this doesnt make sense
this 'straight ace', runs with a 'pack', that dosent exist,
like his location, after i give his loss record a quick edit,*
^^^eh.....weak punch
Ironic 7 shadow'queen gettin merk'd in daylight, (crew)
This kid could drop on mt.evrest-he still aint same height,
^^^another weak punch...no real wordplay
battlin me, the price to pay, a lot more than out of pocket,
it aiight i got the votes, like im george bushes ballot boxes,
^^^lol...ok wordplay, but you should remember, al gore actually had more votes....
this kid is only gonna shine for a second, like flickerin lights,
Win after Win after Win, peeps like you turnin me into a website,
^^^eh...ok wordplay...weak punch...weak closer


i gotta go with straight ace...he had stronger punches. 007 just didnt have much to his shit.

vote: straight ace

check the sig for my battles.

Ace

007 is wack, overpraised middle weight.. & all he says is stupid..
The line above this, did a better job at dissing me, then you did..
Good opener..creative and strong punch
Would throw a personal, but this kids character is utterly dead..
U'll get 1 vote..
.......Thats one more then when u applied in the Center thread..
Good personal...good punch
I'll lay off the personals i might leave him nameless..& nought...
..How i know? look at his name..it reflects of average thought..
Another good personal...liked it
Realize & see the only opponent i have yet to conquer is myself..
For that to apply to u..go & delete all ur alias stored on ya shelf..
Creative..
Kid thought just cause a took a while I was brainstormin mad...
..Research for personals?..u dont have a personality...thats sad..
Meh...coulda been re-worded better


007

who's this kid??? shit, 5 wins, but he's still childs play,
he just here to up my win column, like aeroplane trays,
Good vocab...good opening
this 'straight ace', runs with a 'pack', that dosent exist,
like his location, after i give his loss record a quick edit,*
Pretty good personal...
Ironic 7 shadow'queen gettin merk'd in daylight, (crew)
This kid could drop on mt.evrest-he still aint same height,
Blah...wack
battlin me, the price to pay, a lot more than out of pocket,
it aiight i got the votes, like im george bushes ballot boxes,
Creative...nice
this kid is only gonna shine for a second, like flickerin lights,
Win after Win after Win, peeps like you turnin me into a website,
ok closing

Overall - very close battle...but Straight Ace Edged it wit more personals and harder punches

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