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The Mage
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Snow capped peaks, where the gorges run deep,
Falling steep, Deep within the wilds, where the echo’s sleep Where the wild life creep, try’na keep hidden, Where the trees wither twist die and cease to be living Ravens fly, the noise chilling, round a small abode Furs hanging, dream catchers with stretched toads No roads or track, thick bushes, n surreally composed The home of a Mage, feared and revered by most Scorned face, piercing eyes, staring hateful like a ghost Crooked staff, with a skull fixed tight to strike fear into the host Supposed to conjure evil summon demons form beyond The gates of hell, reaping souls with the strike of his wand Cant abscond, the wrath it entraps pure darkness enwraps A blanket of evil cast, cant escape cos it grasps tight n wont relax Til you collapse, now this sorcery lives as a spoken legend In the mind of descendants, another fable someone invented Unbeknown alive, but died cos he was forgot and resented! jus a quick drop..sumthin different...pZ |
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...Never falis...as always..Nice piece...good content...excellent wordplay..last two line were extremly nice...
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nice, flowed well...vocab good and some wordplay in there too....this had it all....keep droppin..
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Nice one yo. The structure was impecable and your flow was good. The lyrics were good too and you stayed on the subject very nicely.
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appreciated....thnx.....
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Yeah i agree man this was good drop here.....structure in this was pretty good i thought.....this piece had good flow, it stayed on point through out the piece, never really fell off.....you had good vocab....had good wordplay...overall a nice piece...keep at it.
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