Kronik from C4 got 1st verse, Chico from around the way got 2nd and I got 3rd....me and kronik on the hook


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listenin now....

beat: nice beat...plain but thats wut makes beats sumtimez....

1st dude: he spit coo...voice is a lil loud 4 tha beat....his lyrics is coo, flow his ok...he kinda rap EXACTLY like 50 cent...but overall good...yea he sound juss like 50...

hook: coo, not badd....

2nd dude: is arite...his flow is arite, kinda off, and changes up 2much...his lyrics were coo tho, needs juss 2 werk on his flow...

3rd dude: this verse was niice, only thing i didnt like was the quality, the flow was coo it changed up but inna better way...the lyrics were coo


this tracc was coo overall...nice shit


CIN

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Droppin June 1, 2004
Smigg Dirtee Presents The A-Team "Team Work"
(The Real A-Team is: Silas aka Smigg Dirtee, C.Gigolo, JBoog, Kilo, JCin, Steezo, Bandit, L Cap)
Featuring: Luni Coleone, Jay Tee, MC Eiht, I-Rocc, B-12, 12 Guage Shottie, Jack D, Macnifacent and many more...
Label: The A-Team/Money Hungry Ent/Navarre

i agree wit first manz having vocals turned up too loud... he got a nice an' simple style to go with the simple beat... lyrically nice... hook a'ight,, not the bes' i heard...

2nd man, nah... don't like his style... vocals again too loud... his lyrics is soo simple, spittin' sum spanish shit, that's a'ways coo, but been done so whatever...

you make the track, best flow, bes' style, bes lyrics... i'm feelin' u'r part of this the most ...

overall not a bad track... but u dun better... 1

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lol the first nigga do remind me of 50 cent. his flow was coo. i aint feelin the second guy neither his rhymin scheme was off point sometimes. straie was cuttin it tho. i was feelin that twistin style play boi. keep doin whatchu do

hmm...beats...kinda...buggin at the moment...lol fiddy...soundin like a deeper voiced fifty cent...ohh....is he rappin...i thought he was on the hook...ehh he was cool...kinda feelin it...

hook was coo
....this dudes interesting...aint feeling his voice or delivery...aight lyrics...it aint garbage...dope spanish.... but he was straight...

hooks coo...

word at straie...rippin the track...all ur sound levels sound different...maybe the volume at which y'all spit...hmm...good verse....u did the damn thing...
coo track overall...
keep dropping
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lol....yeah the sound levels ARE different...kronik be fuckin screamin on the mic.....I'm tryin to adjust my shit to get it right..y'all keep sayin Im too loud,lol, damn now Im too quiet,lol,for real though its that damn soundclick.you lose ALOT of bitrate through there.Ima get it right though...thanx to everybody for the in depth feedback.much appreciated, will return the favor

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First Mc was cool-I like the sound of his voice.he sounds relaxed-2nd mc is rushing-he is not riding the beat at all-dont like it..3d Mc is interesting but its hard to hear the sound of his voice because of all the Chorus efx on the voice.


about the beat
I liked the pitched kick together with the bassline.Melo could be more interesting.

peace

nice shit........

1st kat...koo nice flow.....hook...also iight........catchy

2nd made yall kinda look bad....nice spanish

3rd....you got the best flow homie....str8 flames....

get at me
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LMAO.mayne.........y'all can't be gettin on Chico like that,lol.......this was a remix...he aint on the original,lol...he's coo, and he ALWAYS wants to get on a track wit us, so we let him on this one..I'll post anotha one wit him on there, It's alot better than this one,lol........damn, I hope he dont see this....his feelins would be hurt,lol........trhanx for the honest feedback

Yeah that first dude sound like Curtis Jackson alright...G G G G nah...That would be corny...His vocals is loud as hell though...I ain't Dr Dre though so f*ck what I just said...

@nd dude sound like Eazy E...Damn he sound like Eazy...He was ridin the beat a bit to much in the beginning but flipped on that mexican sh*t in the end...That was ills...

The last cat was cool...Don't sound like nobody off the top of my head...Lil too fast for me...I'm too stupid to understand...I did hear a bad chick a baaaad chick though in the end...

Nice sitar guitars on the beat...And tell Curtis he good on the hook too...

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