Baby girl i know you on that solo creep/
im'a holla at ya ass when ya moma sleep/
baby girl you smell good especially whats down below/
take ya panties off gurl you got things to show/
im'a tap that ass make ya booty clap/
bitch bend that shit over ya booty get smakced/
and before we do that we gotta take it slow/
put that booty talk on we gotta watch the show/
yes girl you know you gotta get on ya knees/
gurl stroke it while you suck it cmon do it for me/
maby if you get lucky i'll eat you out/
you got some bomb ass pussy and thats what its about/

copywritten May 5,2003
written by Ivory Thompson

good drop.... really got the flow going and the content and the way you worded it couldnt be faulted.... damn good verse....pZ

good lookin out see yall i told yall exclusive shit no bull shit

Huh?

This was kinda lame...

Good flow, but it's nothing more than a sex rhyme...

And a simple one at that...

No vocab, no wordplay, nothing but basic shit.

I really don't think ya gonna need that copyright...

Who's gonna wanna steal that?

3.5/10

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fuck you
yo look i aint gon stress over you
now if i had a mic on my computer i'd rip that shit

^^^ And if I had a banjo, I'd play country...

So what?

You put the verse out to be judged...

I did what you asked...

What's with the "fuck you"?

Get over yourself and your elementary rhyme.

And be peaceful.

(by the way, did you know ya sig scrolls the wrong way?)

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That really wasnt a good verse...
Had no real content...

And dont give me this, it'd be dope in audio shit...

Listen to Brother Ali... he has dope content in dope audio

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who da fuck is that and you talkin bout somebody hot you like 2-1
so you shouldnt even be talkin look fuck da rest of yall that hate this shit if you got a problem wit it thats on you

I have an idea...

Why don't you battle either one of us and lay ya beef down in verse...

I'd suggest battling Trapt, though...

You'd have a better chance.

Come into my den, said the spider to the fly...

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Born to you know who Trapt is?

Anyways homeboy, this verse was basic in every sence of the word

and if you feel that my opinion is bad...set up a topical battle and link me

ill let you pick the topic

if not, just shut up about our opinions and get better

greatness holy shit!!..

*gets back to reality*
real weak, no vocab
Flow was wack...
uncopyright this and go join RnB wit luther vandros

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My people skills are way better then yours, nigga..

whoa..this shit was wack as fuck


now say some dumb shit so we can battle..

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Actually 2-0

And on RB im 116-10. (not including all the leage matches and such I've won)

Brother Ali is doper than you could even dream to be

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ok ok i know i know im o-o but they eyes seeking out weakness now that shit right there straight stinks wit the meanest copywritten that shit was straight sloppy written wait let me stop i see where this going i spit in evcerything its a habit but for real that was straight dr.suess we all realize why you are 11-14 and you dont roll wit a tight cliq or regime we ar now dumber for reading your rhymes next time you post put a disclamier "caution weak mc at work"


"Don't get mad or hate me it's not my fault your mom tryed to rape me"

Krackmittens

haha, I edited his fuck you post, saying "don't bitch, I'm surpirsed you got feeback at all -maven" and he edited it back =)

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