15 mins after check in
blind spit
no bullshit ass voting y'all do it anyway fuck it vote for TAKTIK. Ill I don't give a flying fuck

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I checked your bitch slapped message and you talk about rapeing me/ You better reverse that process and stick yourself B
Nigga my style dirty and underground like Oshama
Blow up your whole shit like grenade on the chest of Drama
I take your own style and steal
I make that mothafucka ill
taktik nigga you need mental talking about rapeing guys
niggaz you come to the hood and turn bitch and die
On R/B I have no alibys mostly emenies
I serve you with telekintic energy

I kick to verses in ten minutes
Nigga my votes will reflect a win in ten minutes
You garbage gay nigga talking about ass rape
I bust freestyles like teeth busting grapes

hurry the fuck up

The second shit was just for fun don't count that shit but this verse is taking too long I should off that on GP you see the rules most mothafuckas cam't freestyle on here.

man I said 15 mins and this shit is half hour already man what the fuck yo did you read the rules man.

Aite.

You Headin for the worst. ya minds practicly bleadin..
Your rhymes
are like empty dictionaries they dont have no meaning.
Lyrical ya weak,spits are trash so its best u just dont post..
Your scripts are married to garbage .pretty much your a joke..
Damn kid ya rhymes aint flowin so u feelin the back draft..
Its like i dont get ya wak jokes but i get the last laugh..
Im killin kids reavilin there shit verse aint nuthin to brag about..
this kid aint no star in star wars he shud outa shut his mouth..
u talk about a freestyle yet i only see u talkin bout rapin an diks..
but u hatin cuz im layin these bricks on u when i aimin my hits..
ya sayin are a bit played the opposite of u touchin the mic..
U a text kid no established mc just cuz u no how to type..
u lucky im not dumpin my rhymes aint totally blow ya hope..
cuz i gurantee your dun kid just take a second an look at the poll votes..




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this was a close one the newb is not to bad but not that good either

flow:tak
punches:lj
metas:tak
humor:lj
personal:tie

winning line
lj had a nice finisher which won the battle close battle


return the favor and reply wit an honest vote thnx

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uppin u dik ridin fagat why dont u vote on a real fukin verse damn u ride dik like a homo its a site man not ya hole life.,...
fukin herb

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jedi=ur shit was trash u need to elevate seriously son i got bored on ur shit

tak=he murked u in the first 2 lines he came better and lol dictionary line shit was funny

vote=tak

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