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Old 01-10-04, 02:22 PM   #1
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Devious depths,
decisions scribe composition leaflets..
loosenote comparisons to rap deficets and wack concepts..
"i'm calling you out"...for real, save it for the back logged..
underwater drama drivel drowning in saturated fat-shit..
spitting slowly to a stammering dribble..
Battling simpletons trying to start out a "wins only" rap-list..
Net thugs, and cyber hardies brings illuminance to my wisdom..
Bright intellegence shine through grammatical layouts to outline their frivilous scizms..
"I got guns"...fuck out my face
I stood on the plane and made faries run carrying their own dentures..
Harping that heat, playing with string family instruments in hell Satans' carrying a beat?..
Eat a dick you fake scungilli eating ravioli wanna be mobster in the ghetto..
Smack dick to your temple thought penetrate skin into brain matter convinced into jello..
Jiggle my balls until the first site of milk severly decreases your visibility..
And bite the curb like urban herbs that can't make signifigant history..
Spotted underlined jotted and printed for your visual enjoyment..
I'm off time non-punctual placing sentences with no punctuation stating my syntax deployment..
But fuck that
I am a master of scriptures oration and demeanor
Fake emcees suck the cock
rot
from the inside out sucking excrement and piss
Eating rectum and dick....cheater
I'll eliminate mannequinne knuckas posing with pop pistol heaters..
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Old 01-10-04, 03:23 PM   #2
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funny shit,but very true shit,yes..you are ..Ill
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Old 01-10-04, 03:50 PM   #3
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funny shit,but very true shit,yes..you are ..Ill


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Old 01-10-04, 04:08 PM   #4
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that was alright it was clever and your vocab is good but you if structured it better and worked on your ryming it would be alot better.

if you see any of my battles on front lines take a look and give an honest vote.
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Old 01-10-04, 04:16 PM   #5
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that shit was clever but the rhyme schematics were hella confusing. but still your style is ill as fuck
that shit was gangsta

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Old 01-10-04, 04:16 PM   #6
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Thats some funny shit, good vocab, look forward to hearing more from you
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Old 01-10-04, 04:20 PM   #7
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stood on the plane and made faries run carrying their own dentures..


ILLLLL...but flow was off..an some rhymes were dodgy...over all nice..not ILL but nice
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Old 01-10-04, 05:07 PM   #8
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Old 01-10-04, 05:33 PM   #9
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Try Out For Corruped Visions Duke. .
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