Figured I'd get some feedback on this verse while the battle gets under way.

It was a quickie battle (10-14 line limit and what not).

Oh yeah, this is also my first post here, so hit me up.

Here goes:

You’re probably wonderin “who fuck is this Wormz-kid?
One post? That’s it? He hasn’t earned-shit!”
Well, fuck-doubters. I’ll douse you with gun-powder.
And now-you’re known as the first coward I beat the fuck-outta.
So don’t even try to front like you-down-with-it,-son.
Beat you with a fuckin bone like Two-Thousand-and One.
And I’ve already begun to start re-writing-the-rules
Cuz I’m “counter ClockWyse” like I got the cipher-confused.
I like-to-abuse dudes that walk in-the-streets-gassed.
That’s why I’m “stopping the Clock” like an incomplete-pass.
I seen-your-weak-ass spittin all kinds of wack-rhymes.
It’s why I’m “killing the Clock”, cuz I’m just wasting my damn-time.

U got 7 & u try using a 1 post puch against him..O.o

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When I originally dropped it in the Battle Forum it WAS my first post.

Picky picky...

Werd.

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yep