10 lines
u spit first

CHECKIN IN.............

IM GONNA SET THE DUE DAT FOR TONIGHT AT 12 EST CAUSE I GO BACK TO MY MOMS SOON............

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yte girl sorry ur day has come do u want to get banneD?? read the fuckin rules u got more than 2 active battles and all u do is freepost and plus i don't like u so pack ya bags and get ready

aight check this..............yo, yo.............

see i enter this battle ready-for-combat, this chick claims she can rap, but cant figure out where "she-lives-at!"/
during this battle my punches will be-gats, she doesnt wanna lose, but when u battle me that just a guaranteed-fact/

with all ur drops i laugh-like-ur-not-serious, u act talk rough, and ur profile says u play football, but the only time u really wear "pads" is durin-ur-period!/
ive read ur shit, but i just starting turning-delerious, its hilarious how wack u r, and yea i keep to myself, but just take a "lesson" and learn-from-the-mysterious/

my rhymes ull swell-ya-brain, ya claim u can rap, but how u supposed to show any talent when u cant even "spell-ya-name"/
i dare ya to tell-ya-fame, cause theyll just laugh cause ur wack, u say that u on top, but fuck, like hell-ya-reign/

when u post it seems u might be good, but u cant even create-an-act, how supposed to drop hot shit, when its obvious u straight-wack/
my punches land wit a great-smack, and u try ya hardes to be good, but already my rhymes have started to decimate-ya-attack/

throughout ur battles ur skills tend-to-slope, cause im exposin ya for wack, its time to stop tryin to pretend-ur-dope/
u may be a chick, but my rhymes ull "arrest" ya and end-ya-hope, but while u locked up take this line of advice and dont "bend-to-get-the-soap"/

EXPLANATIONS - FOR U DUMB FUCKS

1st bar - where it says where ur from, her profile says vancouver WA, WA stands for Washington, but vancouver is in Canada

2nd bar - under her profile where it says interests, she says she plays football

3rd bar - her name is spelt yte grl instead of white girl

4th bar - self explanatory

5th bar - in prison, u drop the soap u get ass raped

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waitin on ur verse yte grl............

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vancouvers right across the bridge from portland OR u dumb bitch/
u need 2 go back 2 the 5th grade and study the map u dip shit/
how the fuck am i supposed to get but fuked/
maybe ur girl does but i dont any girl who has nuts/
i do play football i play 4 different positions/
one of them is punter and ur ass is the next thing im kickin/
maybe i do wear pads atleast i dont stick tampons up my ass/
at least i make since when i fuckin rap/
ur a useless peice of shit/
only thing ur good at is suckin ass/

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not bad..ya'll both spit nicely..but she killed u wit tha tampons line kid...1nE......................................... .................................................. .................................................. ..

i think yte grl did pretty good up in here........the best ive seen her do so far.........nice.................................. ..................

This battle was good, but...

Yo What Up: Your verse didn't flow at all. Trust me, I read it 3 times. Besides that, okay metas, multis and wordplay. I know you could bring it stronger.

Yte Girl: Your verse had nice flow. You attacked his verse. You took some of da insults and put em back in his mouth. Good verse.

Vote: Yte Girl

^^^by sayin house rules, that means all the rules that apply.......INCLUDING FEEDING.......just there u broke that............but whateva...........

UPPIN # 1!!!!!!!!!!!

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Ok
First All votes that voted for yte girl is hate/dr because yo what up fucking merked the hell out of yte girl

the tampons line didnt do shit
half of his lines beat that garbage

fuck the d/r and haters

v/yo what up

Vote doesn't count.
-Axe

word and i also felt that his verse was bigger and had more effort for a win
even though big ass bars are wak imma give it to him for effort

No quoted votes.
-Axe

^^^thanx for the HONEST vote..........

UPPIN # 2 !!!!!!!!!!!!!

LETS GET SOME MORE VOTES UP IN DIS BITCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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nice shit all around.

YO- it seemed like ya tryed to hard wit the punches but they still connected. ya metas were pretty good but ya need more multis and u really woulda killed her. And work on ya structure cause it hendered ya verses a bit. and u coulda came way harder.

YTE GIRL- it seemed like u just tryed to reverse and defend everything he said about u in all ya lines. the Tampon line was hilarious but it didn't seem like u tryed hard enough to beat him. your metas were played and u had no multies. U could come alot harder also. Keep elevatin.

Vote_YO

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