Heartless influences regarding my inner path to hope
Leaving the love trampled and my head tied in a rope
I try to stand tall but I lose my balance of support
Another mission thats impossible it's time to abort
Franchize the mind hex to a state of lost concentration
Compermize with the miirrow image...feel every vibration
The mortality of the religion is causing me to hate the lord
And question why didn't i die when they cut the ambiblical cord
I guess i'll settle for the middle life and stay on thinknig
With eyes wide open never take a chance by blinking
Important values over come my undivided attention
Pation for the other side..becomes a stronger tension
Ghosts, souls, tombstones with flesh under the dirt
Giving me goose bumps..for hypothises of the birth
My purpose is to be the manual science and explore
Travel on a right path or wrong depending on what for
Reach Out your palm to the distance that your depribed
Cause who really knows what reality holds on the other side...

Uppen.

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that was str8, it floed really well and was easy to follow, i like the shit but maybe more multis, but check this out for me and tell me wat u thing its like right below ur post - called Fuck Off the last one

okie...thanks...uppen

Nice drop dog, this drop may sound elementary but I think for you to be a new booty in here makes me think that you known your stuff way before coming in here. keep on droppin da dope rymes and keep ya head up

Yeah this was alright here man....structure in this seemed pretty good through out the piece i thought....you had some good flow in this, it stayed on point through out the piece, never really got off....had some good vocab in this i thought...keep at it.