wow..that was long and hard 2 get through
ima be honest i dident like it, it was long an
drawn out and i really couldent get into 2 what
u were saying, it was like a folklore story/poetry
reading about hel an space an evil an.... da whole
thing was creepy sorry but now ima have nightmarez
lol, peace

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this was an ill drop, fo sho. i usually dont finish reading an open mic thats longer then 10 bars, but this one was definately an eye catcher, the way the story was laid out, your context, verbiage, everything was ill. Good to have you back by the way...

damn ... what can I say this was a great piece.

The concept,flow,vocabulary was all extraordinary...
The structure was also very nice..
But the concept was dope...
And ur first 2 lines were like woooahhh

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My people skills are way better then yours, nigga..

45 views and three replys... ..much has changed..

i would have ta say that ur vocab is well above par... easilly...
but ur flow hasta be Extremely quick to hit tha lines correctly or it won't come off correctyl...
whether ur another Bizzy of Twista? I don't know...
One things for sure though: it made sense while being advanced...Something that seems hard for tha newbs on this site...
So in all respect: good drop....

If you could hit this up it would be appriciated:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=106337

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one of the best open mics I've read so far..

Oooh...I must say, you have a very Messiaheque rhyme scheme..well when he used to drop text anyway.

I actually liked this a lot, it's nice to see another writer like this.

I actually don't remember you from back in the day, I feel kinda bad that I didn't

Well whatever, keep writing!