Spittin 'rounds' as if I my words were open caps,
And cats hopin that my potent rap wont leave em witta broken back,
Quit this, cause youd be better off smokin crack,
Ive already spoken and bitches awoke noticin my skill be provokin rap,
Hittin off wack emcees one by one wit sick lyrics,
Potential possession of obsession, but tension stops when kids hear it,
Then they go ballistic and become another statistic,
And it's all because their mothers sadistic, and their brother is twisted,
But even fucked up kids cant find the words ta say,
They realize that their slurs a gay, like a disease wit these herbs today,
But everybodys a fucking herb compared too me,
Copying you would be a retarded parody, skilled is somthin I dare ta be,

If anybody knows anything, then youll know I got potential muthfucka's.
Mock me now, Cause I'll be teachin your ass someday. One soul, you piss ant say shit now. Bitch say shit but dont even know how to reply to an open mic. This be some funny shit, they laughin at me while gettin laughed at by me, I got the upper hand bitches. Never make an enemy wit a Souldja.

MODS dont close this because my last one got closed because It was my second open mic post, even though it was the first. I posted my last thread before it last night at 11:45 PM.

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Peice flowed well with the use of internal multies aswell as enders,there was also some wordplay incorperated and vocab here was also pretty nice,although there was alot goin on you still painted a picture which was deacent imagery so props on the peice.good stuff.

Peace

Thanks bro... appreciate it.

But you should get nominated for best avatar, that shits fuckin chill man...

yea i kno,hit my peice up if you can dawg.

Peace

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Up once more, & this will be deleted.
, just wait on feedback & reply to other treads, u will get feedback sooner when u do that.

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