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Old 01-15-04, 01:45 AM   #1
bello
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War

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im new to the shit but still can fuckin ryhm/
split fags in half, watchin them bleed ,not wastin no time/
you ever seen a guy get killed in front of your eyes//
bitch dont look at me this shit aint no surprise//
im quick on the streets but bitches keep askin for more/
dont know my algebra but can add up a quarter whore/
these bitches wanna play but they never wanna step//
quick find them with a gun now these bitches wanna repp//
make up your mind bitch, you a bro or a cuz?/
get a fat ass ball now you reppin the drugs/
elevate, elevate but im rippin it more//
i hear you talkin calling me out, now its a full pleadged war!!!!//
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Old 01-15-04, 02:29 AM   #2
Kosta
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that was gay. like seriously . at least add some humor
if you suck, and are new to this. this was just plain fifth
grade garbage.. keep working, and instead of just posting
a senseless piece, go out and read some of the better
writers, and look to improve.. pz
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