jus' a keystyle....

my message touches the soul, even tho my shits twisted...
if your impressed when you listen youll probly be in prison..
modern day thugs are... sorta G.. sorta bitch...
i like ta cut off their heads, and hang em up as ornaments..
ill bury you alive in a oak casket, and lock it fa good..
so when your tryna save your life, your really knockin on wood...(HA)
fuck a punchline, id rather punch you straight in the mouth...
so if you got some shit against me you cant say it aloud...
dont talk shit unless you plan ta drop ya verses tanight....
cuz noone cares if a bitches bark is worse than its bite...
but someone cares when the bite is turning into a knaw..
chewing through the cheek and harshly burning into the jaw...
my guns are hidden in the card catalogue inlets..
thatz why my trigger finger is the same as my index..(come on..)
i hold the best of both worlds, yeah bitter n sweet..
cuz im the nastiest emcee alive, literally

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This was alright for a keystyle....structure in this was alright, could be fixed up in a few parts though but it was still alright....you had some alright multies in there....flow in this was good, it stayed on pretty well i thought...overall was a alright piece...keep at it.