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Old 01-17-04, 12:39 AM   #1
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The Eclipse..

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M~M:
The day has dawned... the shades Are Drawn
There is no tommorrow - and Today Is Done
N Its No Mystery Sureal's Skillz Fade The Sun
Crews?! We've Evolved Into The Auspicious One
How this Is done? - Its not done..... Its Over

Bribeone1:
battle horns hault and silence scorns the revolt
awed at natures wonder and how it seems to revolve
around the grim fact that life ends where it starts
and joy afloats while pain slowly sinks into hearts
just seeing the scars edged deep in my imagination
detailing the path of new life spawned in cultivation
of talent- corraled in no ones shadow, given free will
shuting critics with fear for spoken words' new feel
taking spotlight by the throat squeezing every breath
breaking pencil tips to bury ure thoughts with the dead...

Sureal:
.An Era Is Unfolding, The Skill Is Complete
.The Darkness Is Holding, It's Time To Compete.
.Almost Seems Undone, The Sky Turns OverCast.
.There Can Only Be One, Fear Flips Contrast.
.The Shadows Start Moving, Then It All Begins.
.The Cold Is Confusing, As Chills Hit The Skin.
.Many Winds From The Sun, Have Been Returned.
.A New Legend Has Begun, A New Lesson To Learn.
.Set Your Ears Forth, To Hear The Scorned.
.From South To North, All Have Been Warned.
.I'm At My Wits End, We Are Worded Perfect.
.Never Second Best, It's Just Not Worth It.
.All Goes Dark, Thoughts Start Making Order.
.A New Crew Embarks, Eclipse Is Taking Over.

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Old 01-17-04, 12:48 AM   #2
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...damn... and this is just a glimpse...
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Old 01-17-04, 01:02 AM   #3
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Awesome! It's just you 3 in the Eclipse?
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Old 01-17-04, 12:29 PM   #4
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yo, crazy shit but i liked and your views were quite concrete,. i should learn from you sometimes, i like the way you structured it. keep it going and don't stop dog.
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Old 01-17-04, 08:20 PM   #5
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Up This. Read This Not The Noob Bullshit Verses.
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Old 01-17-04, 08:31 PM   #6
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Nice collab fellas ... Nice portrayal of each of ur views ... Not too long ... But got the message across ... I was feelin' it ... Keep doin' ya'lls thing and shti can only get better ... Nah mean ... Keep writin' ... Peace
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Old 01-21-04, 06:09 PM   #7
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wow..nice ..hehe up
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Old 01-21-04, 06:46 PM   #8
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You 3 wrote well.

MM---Good Solid opening verse...i enjoyed the read and the way you started things off

Bribe--i enjoyed this also. great verse nice multies and such also had a good rhyme scheme...the way you wrote this was very good nice job

Sureal...that was dope...i thought you had a great verse with nice emphizes on your crew...very well done

great collab guys...it was an enjoyable read
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Old 01-21-04, 07:06 PM   #9
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u AINT GOT NOTHIN ON ME man
if u think u do battle me
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Old 01-23-04, 08:55 AM   #10
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^ ^ herb. no up.
why wouldnt u fellas want to read this,
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Old 01-23-04, 08:58 AM   #11
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..Wow..dope...very nice collab..al thre had a very good flow going on..very good content to go along with it...nice~~
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