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M~M: The day has dawned... the shades Are Drawn There is no tommorrow - and Today Is Done N Its No Mystery Sureal's Skillz Fade The Sun Crews?! We've Evolved Into The Auspicious One How this Is done? - Its not done..... Its Over Bribeone1: battle horns hault and silence scorns the revolt awed at natures wonder and how it seems to revolve around the grim fact that life ends where it starts and joy afloats while pain slowly sinks into hearts just seeing the scars edged deep in my imagination detailing the path of new life spawned in cultivation of talent- corraled in no ones shadow, given free will shuting critics with fear for spoken words' new feel taking spotlight by the throat squeezing every breath breaking pencil tips to bury ure thoughts with the dead... Sureal: .An Era Is Unfolding, The Skill Is Complete .The Darkness Is Holding, It's Time To Compete. .Almost Seems Undone, The Sky Turns OverCast. .There Can Only Be One, Fear Flips Contrast. .The Shadows Start Moving, Then It All Begins. .The Cold Is Confusing, As Chills Hit The Skin. .Many Winds From The Sun, Have Been Returned. .A New Legend Has Begun, A New Lesson To Learn. .Set Your Ears Forth, To Hear The Scorned. .From South To North, All Have Been Warned. .I'm At My Wits End, We Are Worded Perfect. .Never Second Best, It's Just Not Worth It. .All Goes Dark, Thoughts Start Making Order. .A New Crew Embarks, Eclipse Is Taking Over. Last edited by Sureal : 01-17-04 at 12:42 AM. |
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...damn... and this is just a glimpse...
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Awesome! It's just you 3 in the Eclipse?
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yo, crazy shit but i liked and your views were quite concrete,. i should learn from you sometimes, i like the way you structured it. keep it going and don't stop dog.
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Up This. Read This Not The Noob Bullshit Verses.
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Nice collab fellas ... Nice portrayal of each of ur views ... Not too long ... But got the message across ... I was feelin' it ... Keep doin' ya'lls thing and shti can only get better ... Nah mean ... Keep writin' ... Peace
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wow..nice ..hehe up
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You 3 wrote well.
MM---Good Solid opening verse...i enjoyed the read and the way you started things off Bribe--i enjoyed this also. great verse nice multies and such also had a good rhyme scheme...the way you wrote this was very good nice job Sureal...that was dope...i thought you had a great verse with nice emphizes on your crew...very well done great collab guys...it was an enjoyable read
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u AINT GOT NOTHIN ON ME man
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ShO-Nuff. Fuckers
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^ ^ herb. no up.
why wouldnt u fellas want to read this,
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..Wow..dope...very nice collab..al thre had a very good flow going on..very good content to go along with it...nice~~
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