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Old 01-18-04, 12:35 PM   #1
R*O*B*B*
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nobody betta test me,cuz i dont wanna get messy
especially wen i step inside this bitch dipped freshly
new lugz,giv tha crew hugz,guzzle two mugz
b4 i do drugs that make me throw up like flu bugz
true thugz,rugged unshaven messy scrubs
grippin 40-bottles like the fukin pepsi clubz
down a 5th crack open a 6th on my seventh 8-ball now i gotta take a piss
i hollerin at theese ho's who got boyfreinds
who gives a fuck who they was
i'm always takin someone else's girl like cool j does
they probably dont be pakin any way do they fuzz
we walked up and stopped there asses and blew they buzz
mics get sand blasted
stab ya abdomen witha hancrafted poket knife and spill ya antacid
fukin felon headed to hell in a handbasket
talkin shit will get u and ya girl blasted
kidnapped and slapped in a vanwrapped in saran plastic
get ya damn ass kicked by these 4 fantastic
furious 4 muthafukaz
flashin in front of ya face winthout grand masters

yo wot did ya think of that 1
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Old 01-18-04, 04:19 PM   #2
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This was alright.....structure could use a touch up in a few spots but it was still good....you had some good flow in this, it stayed on pretty much through out the piece....you had some good multies i thought....vocab was alright....keep at it.
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