6 bars
blind spit
30 minutes

juss checkin in so blind spit lets start thisssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss ssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss s

lets get stratigist, my hits make you a parapalegic,
brain and veins all pulsin an shit, cant walk, talk, or write, how ya gonna spit,

my lyrics decompressurize, your size, this you should be advised,
thinkin you's a hot shot, well ya not, just beginin, n u need to stop,

new to the rb, n u wanna battle me, seriouslly,
you must be confused, drunk off some booze, knowin u gonna lose,

when lyrics get released from my mouth piece, you gonna wind up deceased,
lyrics get spit, tearin through ur script, knowin ur shits prewrite,

decomposen, the arosan, this the wrong route you've choosen,
first will be ur last nite, but its alright, u need to leave an not return to this site,

little fag, bout to get dragged, in a glad bag,
made of plastic, till ya body split, this the 6th bar so u dead thats it.

The mods already changing ya rec to 0-5, you've already lost this
The only time Jae's Roc-in...is when hes playing rock music
Jae thinks he can rap, because the Hood where his game started
But you couldn't play D-on-my-block if ya name was Ben Wallace
I checked out ur atavar, you look like your trying to run from defeat
Its actually true, because Jae really is stuck on a losing streak
Dam Do you ever suck, lets give him a big, nice roudn of applause
Since he delivers more free gifts than even Santa Clause
I was going to come hard in this battle, But I thought "Why bother?"
Why take the time to beat this kid when he can get it from his father
for being such a goon, and stepping up to an opponent like me
You tried to spit at my face, but due to lack of elevation.....
you only hit me in my knees!

good battle jae'roc. Good luck. Now lets get some votes on this. **********************************************

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come on peeps lets get some votes, drop ur link i'll vote on it no problem.....

Jae, ya commas kept throwing me off...
You shouldnt have as many, cause it make your verse hard to read...
I think kilo got this with consistantsy and more punches...

v/kilo

Please return the favor, fellas:
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Kilo gets my vote because of harder hittin punches.
Ja'e Roc u need to fix your structure, make it flow, and add some vocab. Take out some comma's as well that makes it annoying to read. so overall I vote kilo.
Pz.

kilo takes this battle.....his verse was just smoother.....harder hitting punches and his structure made his verse easier to read....jae you just need to work on your structure, make your verse run smoother, the way you had it set up it was kinda complicated........other than that its not bad....keep elevating......

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uppin to get this shit closed once and for all............................................... .................

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kilo took this 1 structure was alot better flow was aight and punches hit alot harder......roc u cud improve urs by trying 2 shorten those stretched ass lines u got.....roc i liked ur wordplay but that is 1 of few good point keep elevatin...

as i took time 2 hit this up cud u both repay the favour and hit this up plz

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108192

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v-kilo for harder punches a better structure and punches,
ja wasnt bad but ur shit was played and improve your flow man,

plz return the favor http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...270#post1108270 thx...............pz