10 - 20 lines

i spit first

regular voting...

this is not my check in...

peace

^ 10 bars... my bad... and u can count this as my check in... peace

ok then, this is my check in.....lets dance.........

..Intro..
Lethal Abolish Scrips..Punches Clean Ya Mind And Leave This Kid Wit Polished Wits!!
U Stoppin This?! Kid Stuck In A Wonderland! Can't Feel Ya Punches!! Cuz Lethal Off'd Ya Fist!!

..Lets Go..
I Spit Flawless Kid..Known For Droppin Hits!! Deadly Winds Impale Ya Life! Than I Blow Guns!!
In A Retarded Course Cuz He's A Slow Son! Losin This Battle! is The Only Thing L Won!!
Always Been Right In Action, I Can Neva Spit Wrong!! Even After The Times I Decide To Lift Palms!!
This Battles Confusin?? Cuz Lethal Getin Rid Of Sniper! But Nobody's Involved!!
This Mah Shits Flawwed?! Bitch Na!! Battle Men, U Get Hit On Tracks Like Gay Sprinters!!
Lethal a Brain Shifter!! There's No Pack To Ya Punch!! All the Pounds Off! Like Training Weightlifters!!
Get Scarred Kwick, When Mah Bars Hit..My Theory's Right! 'No Won is Betta'!!
Thinks he's the New Generation of Illness!! Like Baby Pictures!! Lethal Exposin This Error(ERA)!!

..Closer..
..Lethal Make Ya Wrist Pop!! I Would've Battled Ya MOM!! If I Wanted To Hear The Bitch Talk!!
Compress Ya Thoughts! Leave Ya Mind In A Slip Knot!! Ur Located: In UK! No Wonder Everyone Convertin To Hip Hop!!*

That Should Be 10 Bars...

* - Location is UK... awaiting urs

I notice that your avatar say, Lethel + mic = illness
the only illness you be spreadin, is the 1 from your penis
do ya really think your ill, you proberblly are when you spit, hepatitus B
and the last time you brought a punch woz at your little sisters tea party
i know i'm new here, and i'm illa than you on my debut
you say you drop hits, well how the fuck aint you in a crew?
yea i'm from the U.k, and starting to grow in this game
so fuck you, wannabe your givin the U.S a bad name
so with that i'm gettin ill as fuck and spreadin my infection
so thats it the sniper has givin this bitch a lethal injection!!

thats 10 bars not the 14 you did but it dont matter

peace

uppin for votes

uppin............................................. ...........................

oops... i just noticed that the phrase 'L Won' is supposed to say 'S Won'

lethal came off alot stronger
way better word play and better structure
"Lethal Make Ya Wrist Pop!! I Would've Battled Ya MOM!! If I Wanted To Hear The Bitch Talk!!
Compress Ya Thoughts! Leave Ya Mind In A Slip Knot!! Ur Located: In UK! No Wonder Everyone Convertin To Hip Hop!!*""
thats a great closer



lyrical snyper needs work on flow
"I notice that your avatar say, Lethel + mic = illness
the only illness you be spreadin, is the 1 from your penis"
and would have been a great opener but it still needs some work


VOTE goes to ................. Lethal
please vote on this battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...927#post1103927

thanx, but u didnt poll... peace and uppin # 1 for votes

lethal is in a crew.....

well neway this battle goes to lethal
he threw punches
clever ones at that
snipers flow just sound so old and reused
his verse was unappealing

vote/ lethal

lethal won wid better punches. snipe still came pretty hard doe. lol

can ya'll please put down a vote on this battle...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107016

both yall came pretty hard not a bad battle, props to both yall.... i feel lethals verse had better and more creative punches and his flow was better, sniper work on ur flow and punches and u got a tight verse.... elevate thats all no hate

vote Lethal

can yall drop an honest vote off at my battle thnx

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...043#post1104043

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my rhymes heatin up the track got u meltin like an icicle
this kid aint even old enuf to drive, whats he doin thuggin on his bicycle?!

Merked: NyZ GrIncH(5-1), dUrAsTiK(5-1), mcsnypa03(5-0 DQ)

uppin.............................................

aight... uppin # 2.... and make sure to poll ur votes if u can... lets keep em comin

lethal won this bar far..he was much much more elevated..punches was decent..good ass flow and alot of multis..creative punches..wordplay..over all..a good verse


lethal's verse was weak..he was feedin off Lethal's verse..punches wasnt hittin(meanin they were a good attempt but didnt do to well)...and it was overall..weak..

vote/lethal

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