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Old 01-19-04, 05:30 PM   #1
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Hey. May I say this day is estranged from the normal way to play
When I say, I mean I don’t portray us to be astray, or fucked.. K!
May I give ya my reasons for believing my dealings, be stealing
Aint no heathen, but fuck, I aint peeling the skin from within
I don’t agree with the sins, cos im living within my moral fringe
Like the Edinburgh festival, ya lynched, if ya astringed
Cos if ya aint funny ya binned, ya games fucked, ill spin
But ya lyrics are thin, like the anorexic, I don’t respect it
But what’s expected, cos the kids around here are neglected,
So in metric, their meters behind, but they don’t let it
Bother them, its excepted, and reflected in the mirror of the next
Generation, who can blame them. It’s in the views of the nation
Hatred for the free living, blatant, with no time for the stationed
Those untainted by the newly created, cos anything new is debated
And anything old is dated, within minds torn… so who should make it??
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Old 01-19-04, 05:58 PM   #2
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The flow was the best part of this....it was perfect.
Your vocab was also up to par and your word selection made this an interestin piece.
You were also pretty creative in this too and overall posted a good drop.....8/10

Check my open mic.....links in my sig and are you definatly a member of instant?
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Old 01-19-04, 06:00 PM   #3
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ill hit ya link no problem... and im in if im accepted
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Old 01-19-04, 06:02 PM   #4
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yall gotta go check out Atmosphere-"Trying To find a balance". U can download it on mtv.com.
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Old 01-19-04, 06:03 PM   #5
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Yeah...your accepted. Already on the roster. We got the sub forum for perfection (topical+audio) Thats where you are
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Old 01-19-04, 06:11 PM   #6
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thnx man... appreciated... wont let the crew down.... obviously...lol....
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Old 01-19-04, 06:59 PM   #7
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Flow Was Perfect Man. . I Can't Complain About This Piece With Flow Like That, Straight Up. . Content Was Nice. . Vocab/Multi's. . On Your Level As Always. . I Was Jus Feelin This Shit Mainly Cause Of The Flow Tho. . Cause Ya Kno I Judge Pieces Based On Flow. . So You Getta 10/10 For This One. . Pz.
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Old 01-19-04, 07:12 PM   #8
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thnx man... i was going mainly on flo... jus a new style im trying...
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Old 01-19-04, 07:43 PM   #9
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liked this due to the consistent Flow
Multis sumtimes can be overused
but this instance you got it nicely
it helped prolong the flow thruout
& ya flipped the topic well..........
thats why i got ya down at Peasantry
coz ya hold ya own on a topic which
i like
I'd like to see ya do sum shit out the ordinary tho
get a freaky topic & nail it..excuse the Pun
if ya got Aim- PsDetained <thats mine
hit me up
Once again good spit & keep the Consistancy
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Old 01-19-04, 09:05 PM   #10
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whoa deva Nice man i likes this very much....good keystyle man i liked your flow in this it was good.....ya Wordplay was Nice man I Liked tat quite alot....your vocab was also good....over all this was Good man keep it dropin KuZ....PeacE....
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Old 01-19-04, 09:18 PM   #11
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damn......dev came nice here.......topic was interesting, not too played!.......flow was impeccable....structure was good...metas and wordplay i liked alot....ver apealing....
your vocab could'a been more consistent alittle basic at times but still....good enuff to say the Least......nice drop props keep em comin
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Old 01-20-04, 08:56 AM   #12
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..this shit was ILL~~~~~~seriously..not as good as your recent works..but..still very nice..
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Old 01-20-04, 07:05 PM   #13
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thnx people.... appreciated.....
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Old 01-20-04, 07:33 PM   #14
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its hilarious this is far from Dev's dopest work and its still farrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr doper then ya'll best work. Dope drop Dev i can see u still killing em
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Old 01-21-04, 03:59 AM   #15
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lol,,,,,thnx,,
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