Haiku


Bursting Volcano
Rising Like My Good Skillz
Finally It Bursts

second line is 6 not 7
overall hotness

yea I couldnt fit one more syllable

^Heh. But it's meant to be a Haiku! (Well i aint written one for years...but still..)..]


But yeah, it was good, man. For what it was, and what i represented. It was solid. Good. I say good twice, cos i felt that was inappropriate in this. Another word would've been better. Than 'good'.


..resp..

i didnt like it. not ure fault tho, i havent read a haiku to date that ive liked. i guess its aight...i dont know exactly how to rate it...good?

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