The Real Checkin In

Your a redneck redeyed discrace to hip-hop
Everyone just ignores you everytime that you drop
Your like a motorcycle cop in a novelty shop
Out of place and out of face and you really ought to stop
You aint got no right being here on RB
Because your rhymes are lame, there all the same, it aint hard to see.
You see with me, you get a good rapper - something new
And its easy to see through you bit off more than you could chew
So thats the end, thats all i need, i aint got no more
And its agreed you paid no head and i won this war.

You Aint Won Shit!! But My Hollow Tip\\
Talkin The Talk But Your About To Slip\\
Redeye Rise N Rip You To Shreds\\
You Couldn't Catch Me If You Were The Feds\\
This Guy Thinks Hes A Captain\\
But Hes Scared Of Gun Clappin\\
I Am Hip Hop Stop Your Fakin\\
This Battle Is Mine For Takin\\
You Aint Shit Bitch Whats Up\\
These Rymes In Your Face Leavin You Torn Up\\

aight umm.....i think ya niggaz could of mad dis a battle betta

redeye-dogg ya verse was 2 plain no real punches no creativity and ya bars were 2 short and u had no personals..

captain-same 4 u dogg no real punches or personals...but i think ya verse was better overal u had a nice little flow just step ya bars up and you'll be good

my vote-captain morgan.....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107960
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107533
^^^there go da links 2 my battles...can ya vote on wun or both sicne i voted on ya shit goodlookin..WUN!

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Wack battle...

Captain had better punches I guess.. structure too really.. RedEyes bars were too short to do much.. Better in most aspects compared...
You both need to elevate tho... try and be more creative, add some nice personals etc..
For a better verse overall..

Vote - Captain Morgan

Thought that was an alright battle!!
Redeye made me laugh!!!!
Thought some lyrics lacked 4 captain morgan!!
But not a bad battle!!!
Vote goes 2...........
Vote - Redeye!!!!!!!!!!!!


Check out ma battle!!!!!
Tell me what you think!!

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108141

Morgan fucked this up for actually trying to put down a format and punches.

Redeye just shouted shit that maybe rhymed.

Morgan used some multi's as well and while he didn't tear it, he definately beat Redeye with ease.

Ya'll both need to up your levels quite a bit though.

These were both painfully simple rhymes.

Peace

Holla back...

Born vs. 007

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vote on this battle come on, only 3 more votes, really how hard is that? if you are veiwing this just cast a vote and get it over with. please. (4)

upping again, number 5 last one how about voting on this ???