no bar lim, no d/r votes, 3-0 rape 5 win, im goin firs

aite


look nigga, i set it off in dis internet forum/
this is ya warnin, before i put you in a sanatorium//
you annoying, ya borin lyrics they got me snorin/
forlorn of all hope yo momma shoulda had an abortion//
im warnin you, ill snap at ya like pacman on crack/
clap at niggas like seals havin a frenzic heart attack//
get wrapped in a body bag i guess u could say sacked/
like a quarterback rushin outta tha pack gettin cracked//
im lyriclly acrobatic, victory automaticly me/
turn yo face pale like achromatic drug addicts what was u xpectin to see?//
verbal erections spout from my wreched manifestation/
i send shots ta leave u fulla red spots like flaming dalmations//
there aint no deneyin im raping, dis fake unoriginal cake gettin spankings/
got you lookin like earthquakes da way u shakin and caving//
i leave you broken, like droppin nude statues im smashin ass/
like lathes i shave away at this game, my shit is smooth as glass//
untouchable, dis motha fuckin vet is uncrushible/
im crumblin you, shoulda known not to fuck wit the unfuckable//
like water, your lyrics flow but they showin through/
and dawg, you know my shit is thicker then Elmer's glue//

Lol I Didnt Even Know He Set This Up.....but Ok Ill Give This Cat A Shot...look

Dawg....ur A "mute".....cause U Aint Shit/
Ill Spray Da Clip/
And Have This Cat Change His "alias"/
Give You Punches That Will "tag Ya"/
But Ur "verbel Erections" Couldnt Go Long On Me....wit "viagra"/
Come On Dawg..ill Leave You Verbally Shook In The Game/
Or Bust A Clip At U... Thatll Have Ya Body Parts..."lookin Tha Same"/
Fuck Beef.....cause I "beatin"...im "knockin"/
Dont Think Im Talkin Bout "houston"/
When I Start Releasin Them "rockets"/
Have This Cat Scared...when I Put The Heater To His Head/
And Have Him Beggin The "mods" ...to Start Deletin What He Said/
Heard My Guns Blast...now How Loud Was The Shots?/
Blow Ya Brains Out When Ya Die/
So You Can "think Outta The Box"/
Last Bar Faggot....u Get What Im Feelin Man?/
Ya Dont...ill Leave Head Spinnin....like Ceilin Fans/
Yup.....1
A.t.f

CORRECTION......FIRST LINE..."Dawg....ur A "mute".....cause U Aint Shit/".....SUPPOSED TO READ....."DAWG...UR A "MUTE"....CAUSE U AINT "SAY" SHIT...".....1....MY BAD

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soo many people and soo little votes. cmawn.......

....bump...

Where The Hell Are The Votes.....damn.................................... .....................................

nicce job my boy got it .......we too reall jay im at my grams
alias get ur weight no d/r dawg

lol this is wack...

ack nvm above post. posted when there wus no votes he posted right before me.

ok ill vote..alias ok verse but the punches werent reallyt connecting to me..they were played sorta..flow was nice you get that category..multies were def u..but he came with the harder punches..however a word of advice to all newbies(no disrespect) but dont use the words verbal, or lyrical anything like that..that shows ur newbie status and makes ur verse wack...

v/jay-nova

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