color blind sight correct to get ya mind right because green's the only color seen until noticed in hind sight...
don't get it yet?
the blue of her eyes doesn't bleed through the hue of the grind. dead presidents are the only people true of the time...
think i'm lying?
the root of all evil and we planted the seed, so we only see money wasted as we're wwatching them bleed. religion holds no distinction, this is our only creed...
think about it.think about it.think about it.think about it.
color blind sight corrupted over night because the boy wasnt a hustler until his flow was brought to light...
do you understand?
monetary value is the glue of the grime. the cat makin it is the only one true of his kind; caged within the zoo of his mind...
don't believe me?
individual capitalism causing riots in rhythm, social bias within them, whether you buy them or win them, we're just tryin to get them...it's all about paper
think about it.think about it.thinkaboutit.

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Every lil boi is born shi......their ignorance makes them bold......

simply put"...wise words whisperd to deaf ears as no one hears the blurred proverbs that're always spoken clear so i fuckin swear that my where wont be here as time tolls..." second verse of 'Elevate' written by -shi-

That was amazing. Your style and form is great, so abstract.
I've read this probably ten times, just so I got all your subtle points.
I'll be sure to check out more of your stuff when you put it up.

And sadly...Money does makes the world go around.

very nice, very short and sweet..full of knowledge...top quality...with more polish...you could be fantastic mad props, mad love..one

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yea that woz good dawg, very good

uppin for replies

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...do tell...

Every lil boi is born shi......their ignorance makes them bold......

simply put"...wise words whisperd to deaf ears as no one hears the blurred proverbs that're always spoken clear so i fuckin swear that my where wont be here as time tolls..." second verse of 'Elevate' written by -shi-

That was outstanding, your style and flow was on point i must say.
You brought a message to the table that has been brought before, many times,
but executed it with .... idk, something out-of-the-ordinary. Talent shone brightly thru this piece. Props for this one, keep writing, you'll have a reader.

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Poetry
Don't Look Into My Eyes Forgotten
Understanding Once Again
"It requires wisdom to understand wisdom:
the music is nothing if the audience is deaf."

this was outstanding, and so full of knowledge.
you presented your thoughts on this topic well and put it in good light
your flow and strucuture were good
and your vocab was great
but the content and the message were awsome, very unique piece
you kept it interesting and alive

~Tera~
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thank you all

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...do tell...

Every lil boi is born shi......their ignorance makes them bold......

simply put"...wise words whisperd to deaf ears as no one hears the blurred proverbs that're always spoken clear so i fuckin swear that my where wont be here as time tolls..." second verse of 'Elevate' written by -shi-

..Very nice..very unquie style..this piece reminds me of something I'll see out of an abstract textbook(it was that good)..great structure(color fonts are cool~)..this is filled with knowledge..something that is missing these days..you're simple a "Dope writer"..peace..

absolutely oustanding, its so unusualto find peices like this, its a reely great peace

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That was mad nice and really original..Great portrayal of the message, I really felt what you were saying and for some reason the intermingling of the color scheme seemed to add some kind of blanketing message apart from the one in the text, though it all correlates..Great multi's also, not that it matters much in poetry, but the flow was on point and it only further accentuated the moving concept of the piece..Very nicely done..