Life..
Undefined Traces, Left Through Unknown Places Only Defined By Shoe Size..
And Everytime We Turn On The TV We Are Exposed To New Lies..
Children Cries Ring Out Through The Night, Yet We Just Walk On By..
People Sleeping In The Streets, Seems Like Society Doesn’t Even Try..
Personally I Walk By, Not Even Trying To Imagine My Self In Their Shoes..
Cuz If I Had To Choose I Would Rather Die, Then Give Up Everything To Lose..
Look Through Societies Eye’s At These Peoples Dues, And It’s Like They Don’t Exist..
The Growing Number Persists, Yet We Always Push These Problems Amiss..
We Can’t Even Assist The Growing Number, We Just Provide A Meal Once A Day..
We Don’t Even Give A Place To Stay, Just Tell Them, All They Can Do Is Pray..
Yet They Struggle Day By Day, And Yet We Don’t Even Stop To Provide Spare Change..
Seems Strange How We Eat Until Were Full, Yet Some People Starve, Is This A Fair Exchange?..

Flip It..
Woke Up Today, Unknown To My Surroundings, Seemed All I Knew Was Suffering..
When Your In My Shoes, Life Is Just A Struggle To Make Something Out Of Nothing..
So I Just Try To Get By, With Nothing To My Name Except Rags And Unknowns..
A Different Life I Wish I Was Shown, Just For A Day, So My Soul Is Not Alone..
Oh Wait, Someone Is Walking This Way Maybe This Samaritan Actually Cares..
“Have Some Spare Change Sir?”
He Walked By Like I Wasn’t Even There, Now What Did I Do To Be Treated So Unfair..

Back To Life..
Society Leave’s These Problem’s In Confide, So Our Eutopian Images Do Not Collide..
So If The World Provides You A Chance To Lend A Hand, Don’t Just Walk By In Stride..
Decide To Leave Footprints On Someones Life, And Take A Look Through Their Eyes..
Cuz You Don’t Know How Much Of A Difference You Make Until You Try Their Shoes On For Size..

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I liked this pice.....Cos U followed the Concept all the way,used good vocab and wordplay and the flow was gud...all in all...V.Gud...N some meta's were gud 2

realy realy good verses, the message was really good and it is true and excellent flow which made it easy to read, good style.

vote on my battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108195

thanks lets up this

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uppin..

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