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The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

Judgen by your character your getten pushed back under average
Mentills cursed with dick riders thats how his writtings get leverage
Kids a giant..but unrealistic got the game twisted like heavon in harlem
Bossed up..with a bunch of guys..and you tell me that isn't a problem
An acro nim? whoa..your literate..now go ahead an reach D-I-E
Taken the net game above what it is..like a slut..bein taken seriously
Dump this bitch off..tie em to the cross..fuck em over like jeezus
Use saliva gas and spit flames burn you like the bibles thesis
Kids in a state of mind thats pushen above the normal perspective
Cuz i'm pickin ye death..
Rb wont mind..we all know you need respect to live

there ye go man..

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

Let's focus, Ur hopeless ain't no other way MeNT can approach this
Cuz U and the L are meant 4 eachother .. Like projects and roaches
Im wiltin' this Locust .. U shoulda known this .. MeNT is golden wit text
Scopin' ur mess - My checc in already got ur avy holdin' ur chest
Im foldin' this 'vet' .. Chokin' this pet, Got em goin' delerius
Peep his name .. Proof that Acro Nim is really The Initial, Period
Fucc ur chariot duke .. Kid thought he was hard hittin', Really though
His rhymes couldn't have shine .. If he was walkin' aside of Heleos
Be serious .. Never seen duke battle .. So to me this is news
U lose .. Especially when the voters are the rebellious type that say 'fucc rules'

Blah ... There U go man ... Another doo doo verse by the ment ... Fucc it ... Can we get some votes ?

V/Mentill

Rule-your Punches dint make impact the whole way thru at all
your punches werent awful but they were bad n lacked quality
you struggled to gain a foothold n jus used random punches
but you did kinda bring ya own style..whick was Ok

Mentill-Bad verse for wot ya can produce..but ya did have the best bar
in the match..the 'Projects n Roaches line..Lmao at that
metas were blah but witty which helped n ya did have a good flow

Props
pz

BE SURE TO HIT THIS UP WEN YA SEE IT..BEING MAD MAD MAD SLEPT ON PZ
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...06&page=1&pp=15

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What Brix said...

Rule's shit was just soft.

And real reachy...(comparin him ta jesus?) (problem/harlem?)

Nothing impactful bout it, sorry.

Mentill fucked it up with nicely and PROPER multi's...
(this is how multi's are suppossed to look, kids!!!)
(not when even the punchline is a multi...some kids don't understand how it kills a hard punch when you force even it to multi-up! Thank you, Mentill)

So, yeah, cuz he didn't go multi-crazy, he was able to set up his shots...

And deliver nice connecting punches that utilized wordplay and personals.

Mentill

Peace

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Vote = MeNTiLL

For actually having a punch in his verse. The meant for each other line like projects and roaches got a chuckle out of me. So did the, "avy holding his chest" line. Good punches. Rule, came decent at best. Punches didn't really hit that hard. Rule tried to put together some punches, but they just didn't connect. I like MeNTiLL's style. First person that works with semi-multis and that it works for him.

Vote.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108919

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vote: Ment cause he's a sexy bitch... like whoa... watch me get to 100 characters just before I say WHEW..!

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Hey I voted on this shit...

Now I have an Elite battle, so...

Please drop feedback...

Thanks...

Peace

Drop ya vote right here!!!

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rule your verse was blah

i wasn't really feeling any of it,

i didnt see any nice punches that stood out to me

mentill your verse was pretty dope

more noticable punches along with good wordplay,

the last line was pretty funny

vote mentill