My Philosophy, Is what I live by, Though not on Solomon's Level
Knowing My brain goes against my Heart, My skins it's own Rebel
And If I sleep, More bodily functions Completed Than Eyes Opened
If thats the Case, I'd write in My sleep, For unlike my eyes..
My Ideas are never really open...
My Philosophy May seem Like Nothing, And Nothing seems Good
I thought I held it All at Stake, But I really Had Nothing to Lose
I keep True to myself, My own world, producing illusions Like You
Nothing in this World may be worth it, You think..
Until that special Something You Lose
I'm quick with My Tongue, And My Mind Is never Fully Reacting...
You Call My Thoughts Something Like Hip Hop
I call it Balancing on the thread Between Rap and Backpacking
Exacting My sentiments, Wishing My thoughts Would Blow through Speakers
Heard By every Mind in the World, If Only I could Really Reach Them
It's not on Solomon's Level, But I hold My Philosphy Close To Me
I want My Thoughts To reach the world...
But How I thought them, I leave To My Identity
And maybe Your Worries

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This was a pretty good piece, nice take on the topic,
the content was good, you had some good concepts,
i liked the part about unlike eyes ideas are never really open,
dunno why, just some reason i thought that was dope,
flow was ok, vocab and the way you worded your lines
was dope, overall goo piece,

check this out

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109162

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Nice Topic And Pretty Good Piece Here Man. . Feelin It All The Way Through. . Flow Was A Little Choppy. . But Various Lines Were Dope. . Vocab Was Where It Shoulda Been For This Piece. . Overall. . This Was Enjoyable Although The Flow Was Sketchy. . Pz.

And If I sleep, More bodily functions Completed Than Eyes Opened
If thats the Case, I'd write in My sleep, For unlike my eyes..
My Ideas are never really open...
^ ^ ^ Dope Lines Right There Man.

Check Out "I Jus Wanna Talk" When I Get It Up. . Preciate It.

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I have to beat this?
Shit!

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she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

^I thought You'd Like it.
You probably will beat this..lol

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i thought this was prety good... good concept, but seemed a bit forced in places, not as smooth as it could have been... but the scheme was carried nicely, towards the beginning it was a bit choppy, but picked pu... but as a piece not much wrong with it,,, decent drop... return the honesty

..Dope..great content...good imagery..although your flow seemed force at times..but..other than that..simply Dope...

^..

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