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Old 01-24-04, 11:22 AM   #1
khanfLik
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Just a sample by the dude, new to forum not to the game.

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It seem like everyday//
I hear the same shit from niggas,
Just said in another way.//
Me, Ima do it in another way//
Perfect my lyrics//
Not my image.//
u know gotta triple the digits//
Im trying to have a nine
but not my waste.//
I want it wit 7 zeros locked in a safe.//
yeah, stack my chips,
disappear go polly wit mase.//
im similar to a burna
cuz im hot and all in ya face//
Nothing for the game to do
but sit there and take it//
like a chick bent over
standing there naked.//

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Old 01-24-04, 11:25 AM   #2
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This shit sucked in everyway..
I spit better than you everyday..
I'm gonna do it another way..
My bars better than your casue I'm better in everyway..
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Old 01-24-04, 11:29 AM   #3
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I gotta agree wit Penskills here.... There was no flow, pre-schooler vocab, and no subject matter... Keep postin an you'll get better tho...

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Old 01-24-04, 11:46 PM   #4
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this wasnt that good....you need to work on your stuff.....try structuring it a little different....try adding some better vocab in there....also try adding some multies to it to make it better....but keep at it.
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Old 01-25-04, 07:38 AM   #5
dum n00b
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khanfLik, y the fuck u choose that name?//
is it cuz ur fucked, gay n lame?//
no need 2 answer ma questions
i'm spittin rhetorics//
not metaphorics or chronical bollix//
now u wanna perfect ur lyrics? use words that rhyme;
u trying have a nine but not ur waste?//
wat u spittin bout, da fuk is ur taste//
u similar to a burna cuz u get smoked n used//
son were u born like this or u still gettin abused?//
u didnt say shit so not much to reply to//
u about a good a rapper as a cok suckin ju//
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