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01-24-04, 02:42 PM | #1 | ||
Aint Nobody Iller Than Me
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Death Cries
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"Death Cries"
[Verse 1] A family disagreement, offspring becomes vehement She's no longer content and makes her final descent Parents say nothing's wrong, thinkin' it won't last long So they continue on, not knowin' what's to come upon A product of the street, sayin' she can take the heat Life will soon deplete, body and soul will soon discrete Offered a place to stay and she accepts without delay Starts to dwindle away but says she's havin' a bad day Once arrivin' at his place, wraps his hand over her face Her mind starts to race and her heart slows its pace The body drops to the floor, what did he do this for? He runs to the door, knowin' what it is that he's in for The cops found her dead and as the news spread Her parents turned red. . .and then their tears shed [Chorus x2] Death Cries People fail to realize Life don't last forever Say your goodbyes [Verse 2] Priorities were a mess, mom at the bottom of his list Never even knew she exist, his whole thinkin' in a twist Busy wit' somethin' to do, it's more important in his view Like gettin' another tattoo or smokin' weed wit' his crew As time passed she became ill, her health goin' downhill On 10 pain-kill pills but her son never came around still It hurt her even more, even worse than it had before Didn't know why he'd ignore or have no sympathy for her Things eventually got worse, was in the care of a nurse Under her tears she submerged, whole life went adverse He realised he was bein' cruel and drove to the hospital Thinking about what he'd do and what he would say too Along with a flower bouquet he went quickly on his way But he picked a bad day. . .his mother had passed away [Chorus x2] Death Cries People fail to realize Life don't last forever Say your goodbyes [Verse 3] You all need to get the message that is comin' across Life is like a puzzle piece, it's no good after it's lost Once someone is gone then there'aint no coming back And when it does happen it's like an everlastin' attack Can wipe the tears from your eyes and hold them within Feels like you cried so much you could drown an ocean It's a tough situation to have to deal with first hand Could of ended differently but you didn't understand That time is of the essence and you threw it all away And now physically, mentally and emotionally you pay It's over, you can't turn back the hands of the clock Death's like the ultimate security wit' no key to unlock You miss who is gone and now want to be by their side But the only way to get there. . .is by commitin' suicide [Chorus x2] Death Cries People fail to realize Life don't last forever Say your goodbyes Last edited by MP~PHASIZ : 01-24-04 at 02:49 PM. |
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01-24-04, 02:46 PM | #2 | ||
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..Decent flow..decent rhyme scheme..your imagery was okay..nothing special..this was an average drop..peace..
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01-24-04, 03:37 PM | #3 | ||
Aint Nobody Iller Than Me
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