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Old 01-26-04, 09:19 PM   #1
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Turn The Lights Down Dim Smile At My Grin
I'm A Player..But I'm Here To Win..Forgive My Sin
But To Endure Your Actions And Love So Pure
I'd Do anythnig..Tobe Next To Her.
Prime Amusement Is Us Wrestling Around
Looking In Your Eyes And The Bliss I Found
I Didn't Act To Plesent When You Kissed My Heart
I'm So Inlove, I'm Worried It'll One Day Split Apart
As Fast As A Dart In The Air..But Now..
I See You Trully Care..I Think How..
Somebody So Precious Could Enjoy My Presents
Cause Through My Adalesents..Your My Blesson
No Question..Through Our Lessons...
I've Learned To Stable..Kiss You In Public..It's Capable
My Blood Leeks For You..As Does Oxygen To A Lung
My Love..Seeks For You..As Does Protection..To A Relationship Begun
We've Been Together..A Year..Seems Almost Forever
Had Hard Times Sever..But Smiled At Eachother...
Found A Treasure..
Your Picture In The Dark..Shines As A Full Moon..So Beuatiful
So I Silent The Demons Bark..To Hope The Feeling's Mutual
Prayers & Wishes To Treat You For The Queen You Are..
Go Beyond Limits..Past The Boundries Of The Stars..
Hold Close Our Memeries For Us Is A Miracle Of God
Or So I Thought..The Enimies Exscaped..I'm Lost In Fog
Motionless Now..Paralized From Being Unclear..
I Was Startled..
Because You Actually Craved My Reflection In The Mirror
When Nobody Else Did And I Lost All Hope & Faith
Stayed In The Shadows For My Self Esteem Was Misplaced
I Thought You Could Do Better..So I..
I Rejected The Inpulse Of Happiness That You Vowed
I Was Neglected..Shook..By The Love You Endured Now
It Wasn't A Bad Thing..I Got Scared By Feeling Complete
Stayed In Quick Sand..Thinking It Was Safer Then Concrete
Didn't Believe A Perfect Angel Could Feel For My Struggle
Nobody Was Ever Here To Help Fit The Pieces Of The Puzzle
You Wanted ToBe My Sunrise And Sunset..I Was 'Bliss'
I Ran From You..Because Your Wants Were My Life Wish
But Now I'm Ready ToBe Your Horizon Of Dreams
As Complicating The Feeling Seems..I'm Ready By Any Means
I Suffered With Not Having You..To Tell You My Temptation
Thought Holding You Was Only Capable In Amagination
I Changed My Mind..My Life Style..I'll Give You Me..
Because Me Being With You..
Is The Winds Being Free..It's The True Destiny
So I Take This Moment To Write These Last Lines..
I'll Open My Arms Wide..To Hold You Untill My Demies
I Was Scared Cause You Loved Me..I Thought People Were Blind
You Granted A New Perspective In Me..Thank You For Changing My Mind
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Old 01-27-04, 05:47 PM   #2
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uppen...peace
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Old 01-27-04, 06:57 PM   #3
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thought you came at the topic well.... quite a broad one, so could have come from any angle,... the way you hit it way portrayed well with the imagery and building of the pivture.... nice approach... thought in some places the rhyming could have transitioned smoother.... but all in all decent drop...
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Old 01-28-04, 03:05 PM   #4
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^^thanks...uppen
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Old 01-29-04, 08:12 AM   #5
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