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SS: Changed Mind
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Turn The Lights Down Dim Smile At My Grin I'm A Player..But I'm Here To Win..Forgive My Sin But To Endure Your Actions And Love So Pure I'd Do anythnig..Tobe Next To Her. Prime Amusement Is Us Wrestling Around Looking In Your Eyes And The Bliss I Found I Didn't Act To Plesent When You Kissed My Heart I'm So Inlove, I'm Worried It'll One Day Split Apart As Fast As A Dart In The Air..But Now.. I See You Trully Care..I Think How.. Somebody So Precious Could Enjoy My Presents Cause Through My Adalesents..Your My Blesson No Question..Through Our Lessons... I've Learned To Stable..Kiss You In Public..It's Capable My Blood Leeks For You..As Does Oxygen To A Lung My Love..Seeks For You..As Does Protection..To A Relationship Begun We've Been Together..A Year..Seems Almost Forever Had Hard Times Sever..But Smiled At Eachother... Found A Treasure.. Your Picture In The Dark..Shines As A Full Moon..So Beuatiful So I Silent The Demons Bark..To Hope The Feeling's Mutual Prayers & Wishes To Treat You For The Queen You Are.. Go Beyond Limits..Past The Boundries Of The Stars.. Hold Close Our Memeries For Us Is A Miracle Of God Or So I Thought..The Enimies Exscaped..I'm Lost In Fog Motionless Now..Paralized From Being Unclear.. I Was Startled.. Because You Actually Craved My Reflection In The Mirror When Nobody Else Did And I Lost All Hope & Faith Stayed In The Shadows For My Self Esteem Was Misplaced I Thought You Could Do Better..So I.. I Rejected The Inpulse Of Happiness That You Vowed I Was Neglected..Shook..By The Love You Endured Now It Wasn't A Bad Thing..I Got Scared By Feeling Complete Stayed In Quick Sand..Thinking It Was Safer Then Concrete Didn't Believe A Perfect Angel Could Feel For My Struggle Nobody Was Ever Here To Help Fit The Pieces Of The Puzzle You Wanted ToBe My Sunrise And Sunset..I Was 'Bliss' I Ran From You..Because Your Wants Were My Life Wish But Now I'm Ready ToBe Your Horizon Of Dreams As Complicating The Feeling Seems..I'm Ready By Any Means I Suffered With Not Having You..To Tell You My Temptation Thought Holding You Was Only Capable In Amagination I Changed My Mind..My Life Style..I'll Give You Me.. Because Me Being With You.. Is The Winds Being Free..It's The True Destiny So I Take This Moment To Write These Last Lines.. I'll Open My Arms Wide..To Hold You Untill My Demies I Was Scared Cause You Loved Me..I Thought People Were Blind You Granted A New Perspective In Me..Thank You For Changing My Mind
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thought you came at the topic well.... quite a broad one, so could have come from any angle,... the way you hit it way portrayed well with the imagery and building of the pivture.... nice approach... thought in some places the rhyming could have transitioned smoother.... but all in all decent drop...
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^^thanks...uppen
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Open Mics The Weathers Art http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673 My Teenage Eyes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850 Secluded http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851 Open Your Eyes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461 |
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Open Mics The Weathers Art http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673 My Teenage Eyes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850 Secluded http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851 Open Your Eyes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461 |
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