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Old 01-27-04, 05:07 PM   #1
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Allegory vs. Punch N Words

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check in by tomorrow..
verses due on friday..
good luck, have fun ..
don't no show ..
don't half ass ..
read LLL rules ..
10 - 20 lines, agree on it.
 
Old 01-28-04, 05:51 AM   #2
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righty-o.
 
Old 01-28-04, 11:36 AM   #3
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word. I'll try to get this other fucker to show.
 
Old 01-28-04, 04:46 PM   #4
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Quick KeyStyle !!

I`ve been known to brawl, even if drunk Psylense will never fall
N.. I`m not talkin drinks around the house, when I say shots for All
Theres no use to stall, the outcomes the same, the crowd`ll just nod
When I tell you, your punchlines are more feeble, then the fuckin mod
You should call me god, the way I son you.. you prolly wont live
See.. I`ll take Gor out the fuckin running, worst then George Bush did
Forget this kid, a no namer? or maybe a flamer.. its all the same
Only time he isnt below average, is when anyone looks up his name
You`ll never see fame.. with an ugly mug like yours, you`ll stay single
So I`ll end your struggles and powerbomb you to the ground........

throwin you off the roof like old shingles.
 
Old 01-28-04, 05:15 PM   #5
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WeRd....I'll Drop Soon....

Gh05t!...
 
Old 01-29-04, 12:48 AM   #6
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Punch is pure ass & you better accept it’s my time
sure, I’ll cut the bullshit…then you’ll be left w/ 5 lines
Allegory's destined for big times, but is your rap able?
I’ll make ya die slow like a bad day at the crap tables
you gave a new meaning to shook; ill? this fake is hardly
that in fact Mobb Deep are planning to make a part three
I’m makin a killin, not stoppin til the remedy’s blended
now I’ll put the piece to your neck like a seventies pendant
everyone knows you the dumbest cat, so what u denying for?
since this cat’s always in the shallow end… I’ll bring the diving board!
 
Old 01-29-04, 10:48 AM   #7
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vote: Punch n' Words... but Psy I hate when you bold shit... NIce verse though...


that Gor'e line clinched it pretty much... + the below average... lol... I'm done...
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Old 01-29-04, 11:36 AM   #8
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Pretty Blah Battle, No Punches Stood Out For Me From Either Verse. The Only Line That Got My Nod In The Right Direction Was Allegory's Opener. Other Than That, Both Had Weak Punches And Dont Highlight Your Verse, Everyone Here Is Able To Spot Punches And Wordplay.

I'm Gonna Vote Allegory...Reason Being His Verse Had More Originality And Flowed That Bit Better.
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Old 01-29-04, 12:02 PM   #9
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Gonna give the slight edge to Punch...

Only cuz I love a wrestling reference.

And cuz he had some snappier wit shown.

Al threw nice as well, but a couple of lines didn't vibe for me...
(70's pendant, the closer was like, huh? Are ya diving on him? I don't get it, sorry)

Punch used very herbish bold lettering...
Stop that!

But his stuff was funnier, more impactful, and didn't seem as forced.

Close, but Punch.
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Old 01-29-04, 12:58 PM   #10
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Punch is pure ass & you better accept it’s my time
sure, I’ll cut the bullshit…then you’ll be left w/ 5 lines
Allegory's destined for big times, but is your rap able?
I’ll make ya die slow like a bad day at the crap tables

I’m makin a killin, not stoppin til the remedy’s blended
now I’ll put the piece to your neck like a seventies pendant


ive seen ALL of those lines before, your either an alias or you straight bit that verse - i suggest you PM me your alias now.
 
Old 01-29-04, 01:05 PM   #11
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someone told me to bold my shit or you guys wont understand the punches here. my apologies as i wont be doing it in the future. i also didnt expect him to show so blah on the half assed verse. thnx for showing thou allegory.

upping for votes.
 
Old 01-29-04, 02:05 PM   #12
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someone told me to bold my shit or you guys wont understand the punches here.



LMFAO! RB isnt that bad, Psylense = )
 
Old 01-30-04, 11:55 AM   #13
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Originally Posted by Punch N Words
someone told me to bold my shit or you guys wont understand the punches here. my apologies as i wont be doing it in the future. i also didnt expect him to show so blah on the half assed verse. thnx for showing thou allegory.

upping for votes.



LMAO... Hey Psy there are actually some RM cats over here... few UPN niccas... uh... n' a few people that should be on RM... don't worry about it... just bring the fire fam...




n lmao @ some faggot from your buddy's ez board...
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Old 01-29-04, 01:27 PM   #14
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I Cant Expose My Alias Or Otherwise....

Peeps will have personals On Me...Such As You Baron...

And Yes U Know Me...= )....

And I Suggest Me Do Nuffin...

Good Battle Punch...

Gh05t!...
 
Old 01-29-04, 02:02 PM   #15
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Hence why i said 'PM me' so i know you didnt just bite that bullshit. Why do you care that people have personals? If anything they have a load of "Your an alias, scared to reveal it" personals ..
 
 


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