haterz dont know me/
hoes wanna blow me/
u say u gonna do shyt nigga, then show me/
i got yo mind caught in a whirl/
it aint my fault i took yo gurl/
dont ya know she want a real man, not like u a fuckin squirrel/
dont come after me with yo bag of trickz/
callin yo boyz, buncha prickz/
u cant win,u like a fat chic in gymnasticz/
dont hate for who i am/
dont play me for what i am/
ya useless peice of shyt, like a crackhead without a gram/
ya used 2 be rich, but i made ya homeless/
ya like a pimp dat went hoeless/
dont cry bout problemz nigga, u know im soulless/

Firstly, take that shit out of your sig. It's wack and annoying.

Don't post polls in open mic.. It looks shitty and its a n00bish thing to do.. You will get feedback through replies to help you elevate.. Not by people voting for/against you..

Try and write on a topic, use correct spelling, don't use "niggas", don't write about hoes, ice, cash, pimps, players, hustlers or whatever you can think of that has been idolized in the mass media.

This was horrible. pz.