Time to wash some shit away......get ready....

Aight yo....keying...hold on tight

Using enigmatic..ultrasensitive satelite aparratus for status
....My brain waves see storms coming before it happens
Wise'll spit so much..it creates tidal waves when I spray
..They pick up pens, pencils & paper & carries them away
When i got something to say..just release saliva from mouth
& voice echo's to bring clouds..& start pouring on tha mounts
Tha way I prenounce my vowels makes tha current alil urgent
Dropping massive boulders down..& in one breath it'll turn it
Coasting through tha waters motion.. as my mouth moistens
One of my flows or spits..in time go together & form tha ocean
....My verbal knowledge turns solids into a huge liquid mess
Tha fuckin undertow'll bring ya toes under taking away ya breath
Acting like jesus..on tha tops of lakes..steadily walking miles
Then holding my own..fighting off & slaughtering crocadiles
Cuz I rule tha ocean..when I'm flowing freestyling or posting
I can quench tha thirst of dessert throats that was toasted
Its like a fucking army of H2o particles that can't even harm me
Forming words thats scarring mothafuckers w/ speeds Psunamis
Laying out tha waterworld from beneath..making pond dunes
..& Then wiping tha shit away easily..w/ forces of monsunes
Turning light to dark..swimming with anaconda's, boa's & sharks
And leaving shit worse off..then tha aftermath of Noa's ark!

There you have.....Theres a new slate right there...raising tha fucking bar

... What else can I say...ill as fuck!!!

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^Nice feedback!?
Can I get some real feedback?

see this is what I'm talkin' bout...

if your gonnah write a keystyle you gottah have word play, a good flow, and a few big words here and there.... lol... I was feeling it...
see the last cat I replied to had a sort of keystyle thing goin on... but it was pretty boring, not much skill in it... so it wasn't interesting to read...
but you on the other hand got the flow, pretty good wordplay and some creativity.... so it was cool...
some cat's might not like it cause it ain't about much... but fuck it... thas how keystylesa are like... lol...

Good shit man, -1-

yeah man, good job....spelling could use a little work, you lost me in a couple spots
i like the wordplay in this line.."Tha fuckin undertow'll bring ya toes under "..
you lost the flow a couple of times but it picked back up..but yeah it was a nice piece
i wouldnt of said anything but you said you wanted feedback....nice :}-~

Aight thanks....Anymore??

I know theres something wrong with this...
Can I get some feedback...

Blah....Feedback?