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Feeble Minded 5 100.00%
Young P 0 0%
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Old 01-29-04, 06:41 PM   #1
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10 Lines.

I'll drop later.

You know the rules.

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Old 01-29-04, 07:33 PM   #2
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Actually I don't, yo.
You can drop first, since i suck ..

^ theres a personal for you.

young p already checked in, yo . .

wheres ur verse p ?
if its not up in 20 minutes im going to bed...
honestly i dont expect to spend more than 15 minutes on my verse..

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Old 01-29-04, 10:28 PM   #3
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You lost already, like Deja Vu... so whatever really happened to Wits End??
Witnessed Feeb dick everyone in Merk Squad...
.................................................. .....and he didn't even wanna get in!
Calls it generosity letting me in LLL... Kyle, I see right past you.
Only did it so that saying I'm out of his league...
.................................................. ........... is now only half true!
Told me he had enough wins, kids read his verse and died of boredom.
Honestly, I use to think that Kyle was good...
............................. Till he admitted to me that Chrit wrote for him!
That was then, this is now... if you ever had skill, it is completely gone.
And I would agree that you fell off...
.................................................. ...... Except you were never really on!
Said you need to get in the mood to battle, drop 15 mins after u get out?
So if it's a shower that makes you rap well...
................................... I guess you've been experiencing a drought!!

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Old 01-29-04, 11:07 PM   #4
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your punches suck, ya lines reek, I've had enough,
& ya post says "edited to fix structure"... its STILL bad as fuck!
i almost gave him the high five, but left him shallow & at bay,
& P i wouldnt leave u hanging here ! The gallows are that way --->
a Philly rapper? I'll merk him, and bid him farewell,
then leave his dome ringing like it was the Liberty Bell ..
givin me hell? nah young P's barely bearing distress,
what kinda man posts pics where he's wearin a dress !?
he aint even masculine, p'll get ripped like hell ..
..then spit out, abused & once again denied from the triple L ...
 
Old 01-29-04, 11:07 PM   #5
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ayo, this is his verse to get in elite, vote if he won or not and if he should get in .
 
Old 01-30-04, 03:19 PM   #6
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That was then, this is now... if you ever had skill, it is completely gone.
And I would agree that you fell off...
.................................................. ...... Except you were never really on!


^ how many times have i heard that line before?
soooooo played
other than that it wasn't that bad.. in fact u suprised me



but to get everything that needs to be said in a nutshell

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Old 01-30-04, 03:43 PM   #7
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Vote feeble, . damn ur verse young p was a struggle to read,try to vome original w/ punches man, .. Feeble had some nice punches, & was nicer to read aswell..
V/ Feeble.
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Old 01-30-04, 03:45 PM   #8
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Oh, i say in tho. hes not there but hes worthy to be in..no i dont but i feel bad saying he is not, so in.
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Old 01-30-04, 07:59 PM   #9
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Young, young, young..... what happened? your structure is bitten and weak, your played lines didn't hit.... damn you have really detavele (print and take it to a mirror to 'see' what I mean if you can't understand...)

Feeb - punches, personals, once again ripping shit up.... nuf said.

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Old 01-31-04, 11:29 PM   #10
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im ... still blazin` it
 
Old 02-02-04, 10:04 AM   #11
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Verb says in...


Feeb spanked that ass... but Verb says in...
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Old 02-02-04, 11:22 AM   #12
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p should get in, even though his structure was ridiclous
easily like it said in his own verse, simply Feeb killed this

lol, practin punches
sorry, for reel peAce to both !!
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Old 02-02-04, 02:51 PM   #13
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Played verse and whack ........ structure by P.
But I've seen him come much better before, enough ta smoke me a couple of times.
I say in LLL.

But Feeb's ripped this battle with just his opener...

Personals were tight and on mark.

P never stood a chance with that played rhyme and the whack structure.

But he's better than that.

Battle: Feebs

Holla back right here with ya vote!!!
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Old 02-03-04, 10:05 PM   #14
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yo -upping for record - ing pleasures.
P is in.
 
Old 02-04-04, 10:06 AM   #15
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Hello...Link to be voted on up there, guys!!! ^^^^^ Return tha favor!
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